All Comments on 'Star Wars: Justice League'

by TexWiller

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Tons of history and little sex

History lesson of Star Wars and the JLA... followed by a battle scene... the sex was three small paragraphs. What gives?

cryforhelpcryforhelpover 18 years ago
Maybe you should stick to writing fanfic for teens

I'm sorry, I read the entire story but was rather disappointed. What happened to the sex, and _why_ would you want to summarize 2 complete star wars trilogies? They're completely irrelevant to the story. Also, try to play more with character names. Her name is Diana, in english it is highly uncommon to name someone by her first and last name all the time

SamuelxSamuelxover 18 years ago
Pretty Hot But....

The sex scene between Jedi Knight Luke Skywalker and Amazon Princess Diana was hot but...all the other stuff wasn't. Also, I kind of got the vibe that Luke might be queer from the Star Wars flicks and as for Diana aka Wonder Woman...she grew up in an island full of man-hating

female warriors....doesn't that mean she's a dyke ? How come she likes riding Luke's "saber" so much ? Hot story but what gives ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
MORE SEX

It was good but way to much description more sex and more passion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Poorly written!

It was written poorly, due to three main reasons:

1. Not enough sex.

2. You don't do backgrounds on famous characters. You wasted much time that could have been spent doing something else.

3. Break up paragraphs, so that they are easier to read!

Other than those three objections, I wouldn't mind seeing another chapter or two or three...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hot

Hmm, rather unusual crossover, but it worked. Good hot action.

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