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RAAC
weak male + weak husband = no spine = good parental unit?
Really good writing
of a story based on a weak and unlikable set of circumstances. What Molly did before Jim is on her, not really his business. What she did after they were together and even married is on her, completely. She couldn't tell the difference between being really screwed and her fantasy in her head. I think that is a very weak plot point in the story. She should have told the husband about it after she knew that Ron was the father. Jim was such a wuss that he would have been fine with it and it would have been out in the open. Actually since she was his reason for living, for breathing and for dying she probably could have kept on with Ron. And the mean ass bikers, well they would have protected her from Jim because everyone who has ever met any of these guys know how sensitive and sentimental they are. And for those who have never met any true bikers, that was sarcasm. Oh yeah. They really expect their pussy to stay their pussy, and pity the bitch that fucks around on one of them. Trust me, this is true.
I'm still having a problem understanding how she couldn't tell the difference in someone under 6 ft. tall and slender and someone who is 6 ft 4 and really stocky. Jim being such a whiny bitch himself was the second weak plot point that unfortunately set the tone for Jim's behavior in the entire story. She was a bitch not to tell him and expect the lie to stand, he was a pussy for not confronting her and demanding an explanation of why she was having him raise someone else's kid. Raising and loving a kid is the easiest thing in the world to do and any man that sticks around to do that really and truly deserves to be treated with the utmost respect. And if Jim hadn't been such a pussy the daughter wouldn't have thought she had the right to get in their faces and threaten them with Tiny. Tiny worked for Jim, was his friend as well as employee and he should have had enough respect for Jim to not be a part of that scene. But it was a really well written piece, as I said at the first of this rant. And I really did enjoy it, for what it was.
first story
I'm amazed that this was your first story - it was first rate.
I think perhaps what bothers me most about these stories...
is she "LOVES" Jim... Then has sex with Ron the last two times (wasn't it?) on purpose (being nice and not counting the time she got pregnant)... and feels guilty...
Ok, I guess I get the feeling guilty part... I'm just confused by the HAVING SEX WITH HIM WHILE LOVING JIM part... you know...?
1 *
for all RAAC trash. it is even worse when an author is good yet still puts out this garbage.
Didn't Know It Was Ron?!
“she was missing Jim so much and thinking of him and she didn't even realize it was me until too late” – I call bullshit on that one. She HAD to know it COULDN’T be Jim and HAD to be Ron!
too long
A good read but far too long with this plot.
Also, a woman coming off contraception, her thoughts centered on starting a family ........ would she really allow herself to be taken from behind by someone who is clearly not her husband.... I think not.
I also wonder about Jim. His wife has had a hysterectomy, her chance of further pregnancies ended. He discovers 'their' baby is not biologically his .... would he not have a overwhelming desire to father a child, with someone, that is ?
@dissmiss
I would suggest you read the part of her last time having sex with ron again,she hardly knew it wasn't her husband and was thinking about her husband during the act
I wish many readers before writing a comment would indulge in reading the story toroughly instead of reading what they would like to read
Pathetic!
Overly long pathetic story about a wimp. YUK!
another of the supercuck stories
The thing that gets me about these supercucks is, what if he's an only child? His bloodline ends and but it's ok he's a willing cuckold anyway. Tiny, Woody and Ali are just as bad, you don't what him to hurt the wife. And are willing to fuck up Ron, but if I not mistaken. Ron didn't rape her, also your taken from behind and you don't know who's plowing you? Sure your not a slut.
Stink test - failed
2* : Over all the story dragged too much and the flipping of characters was hard to follow and not always accurately named.
Per C the whole premise of this story is due to an act of unintentional adultery.
First, how many time(s) did Jim have sex with Molly at the hospital?
C you're trying to sell us that Molly was so deep into her horny daydream that she would not know her skirt was pulled up, panties pulled down, a few minutes of plugging, and Ron popping off, before she realized the potential of 'this' sex?
Molly is a RN, she willfully decided to gamble her child's parentage even though she could have aborted this risk but 'hoped' it was Jim's. She is not a RN that I want in my Surgical OR when I'm going under the knife. She's stupid, arrogant, and vane beyond belief. This is the real reason why she hid this from Jim as he should have dumped her after Jen was adopted as Jim knew Molly was an untrustable cheater. Also why didn't the cuck protect his LLC from Molly for Jen - dumb, dumb, dumb.
Just can't see it
Everyone wants to continue their bloodline.
He hadn't been married that long, I can't see a obviously rich man not wanting to have a child of his own -- not buying what your selling today.
No
The fact that the wife wasn't dead at the end of Ch 02 makes the whole series hysterically stupid and unbelievable. What trash.
Writers Piss Me Off
Why do so many writers make the victim accept partial blame after the damage is done? Jim should have had Ron Davis and Molly taken out Into the woods or desert or wrapped in chains and dropped into a river and terminated. Quit making the wronged spouse shoulder even more pain brought about by a cheating spouse.
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