All Comments on 'Goodbye...'

If you're giving him up can you send me his number?

Wasn't sure about 'my veins were on fire' though.

But, as always from you, just great.

DC:

For a phone conversation it is at its best, yet the parting of lovers is always sad and the sadness flows through the eroticism. A great tale. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I'm humbled, and at peace again. Thank you...

Different mood, different format...same great characterization and writing. Ya did it again, Red

Red...your work always amazes me. Such passion, desire...I am speechless...

shouldnt have to drag them out. TK U MLJ LV NV

Very moving account of phone sex as goodbye to a relationship caught by the third hurt party! Great phone sex! Could have been real! Great Story!