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Twelveoone helped with the editing of this poem. Thank you for your time and patience 1201.
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Another enjoyable poem from you. Thanks!
Curiouswife
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Finally, I get to cymry. And as usual, well done. With so few words, conveys such a feeling of emptiness.
very nice......
and pulls the reader in......don
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as said
"Vagrant winds stumble" is a killer line and it is right up front. Since I didn't do much, I fell OK commenting
some quotes to ponder
fine lines ...12 has a magic touch sometime...nice work U 2...blue
Sounds of sadness and regret
echoed in my heart as I read this.
Is it true I can't go home again?
Excellent!
I love the images that you painted. Nice one
Aww .. Huggs !!
My Gracious, you have such a way with words. I feel it Hun. You paint and it is felt with each stroke of the words that whisper across the page. Just a wonder to read.
I have to give you a Hug because
... well I just have to OK !! *Grins*
I am most def. a fan of Cymry !!
Also, Thank you too 1201
for bring about your part in this poem.
Just lovely and spoken from the heart, me thinks.
* Roses * for u both~
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