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engrossing
nice structure & flow ~ great imagery
~~
What a different style and so creative too. Your muse sure was tickling your fancy on this.
imagery nice -
but this line kicks ass:
to 'damn' many mental pot holes
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that feels something like i would write.....don
I AGREE.. WOW !!! s
something must of set
you a fire !
what use of metaphor you
have going here,
reminds me of ,
one bright day,
in the middle of the night...
....and so I am off to the
rest, if as good as this ?
I will need a chain
to smoke , LOL..
-sGp-
Ya know ... I love it ~
I had so much fun that night writing poems
and bouncing with you. This poem, was a riot
to read, and crazy ... just like us eh~
Thank you for the mention,
... you are a Sweetie Pie~
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