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zmp ~ dying to fly

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by Anonymous

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by sweet GA peaches10/23/05

Where ...

is the mind,
when the pen
is drawn to write
such {prettywords}
into my head.

-sGp-

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by LeBroz10/23/05

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Another treat added to the ZMP smorgasbord; just enough to whet the appetite and in doing, craving more. Well done.

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by Scott N. Leavitt10/23/05

**5**

HOORAY!! An other ZMP!! I love it it is SO TRUE!! And it rhymes!! A GOOD one, ZMA!! MORE PLEASE!!

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by Anonymous10/23/05

rhyme and rhythm...

at the zmp best...timing is perfect in this jewel...blue

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by dcpoet4410/24/05

i wonder if this...

little bit could look like this for a different effect. purely your choice.....

The annual cling
releasing when dry
leaves falling
dying to fly

its release -
the annual cling,
leaves fall
dying to fly.
*****
it's just another way to look at it. it would make a strong piece that much stronger.....don

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