you are saying in your writing all women are sluts and hubby go along with it.i for one don't like whorish women and wouldn't stay with one.you write well,but the content of all women are slut sucks.
i've read your stories for a year. love all of them. not my normal cup of tea, but emotional and entertaining. would have commented sooner, but you usually have this section turned off. you have your own type of story and style of writing, and i like them both, keep up the good work. a fan always.
Well written as always (one line stood out... "thinking of what'll get into you" or somesuch). The formatting is professional, the plot well thought out.
As for the flamers, you'd think they'd have a clue by the title of the story. I'm guessing they've got self-esteem issues.
It's got a gradual building to it, situationally at least. Each episode tops the last and you give a good kicker at the end. Not much in the sensual department, but that's fairly common for the genre and nothing to be worried about.
It's not your typical M.O., but if you're up for the challenge, it might be fun to see how they progress over her next few episodes. Sequels are hard – but this one would be worth it.
by
Anonymous10/27/05
No shit enough is enough
Bob give it a rest. The stories are stupid and tired....PLEASE for all our sakes
by
Anonymous10/27/05
Please Please Continue.
I haven't been reading all of your stories like I once did. I've enjoyed them and enjoyed this one very much. I know you don't worry about the negative feedback - hell, it's in the Loving Wives section. What do they expect.
As for this situation I find it arousing to say the least. And if my wife asked me for the same freedom I'm not sure I wouldn't give it to her (after the initial shock of course). I mean, doesn't the relationship go beyond just the physical? Doesn't she deserve to enjoy herself to the fullest? And that has nothing to do with my ability as a husband/lover. The fact that it's done in the open makes it almost reasonable just as long as both parties are in agreement. Hell, I've just about convinced myself that she needs a boyfriend.
by
Anonymous10/27/05
No real man would put up with,
"Dinner is in the microwave"! She asked about the sex and he said "OK". A mutual decision. Strange but wierdly common.
Fixing his own meals was never mentioned. It's time to put his foot down now, before it's too late! He's going to end up with a life filled with left-overs and self service.
I agree with the anon. poster who said give it a rest. I haven't read all your stories, mostly because they are all the same shittin' assed thing day in and day out. Man, can't you do something out of character just once? Every story story is a weak-assed husband (and yeah you real life husbands who do this shit are weak assed too!) and a good for nothing except being a slack-assed cum bucket wife! (And you wives out there who do this shit need a one-way ticket to a nice Muslim nation and let's see how long you last!) Bob, can't you try to broaden your thinking just once? Structurally, your writing isn't bad, just tedious! I would have thought with the crappy votes you get you would have tried a different tack by now!
the husband displayed a backbone and didn't put up with a slut's shit do you in? Are you sure you're not from the UK? It's been nothing but slut-wives and pussy husbands for quite some time.
I know you can write a story that doesn't feature a useless husband (good phrase Chagrined:)). You are a fine technical writer with a great turn of phrase. Your subject matter is amusing (at least to me) but it seems as if you are beating a dead horse.
by
Anonymous10/28/05
Above average..
Keep writing. The lynch mob has no clue what they're talking about. Stay positive and keep writing.
by
Anonymous10/28/05
Sadly Depressing & Hardly Erotic
This comment opening wasn't accidental was it bobbie. The shame is you have talent - the double shame is you know it and still only write for the few pussies - the few wimps who as jaded as they are need your self cuckolding male humiliation injection to feel pitifully subhuman enough to get it up and off. Does it also affect you that way writer?
While I have little regard for a lesser talent having to write short jack off pieces - but since it's really all he or she is capable of - they are largely ignored with just a low score as a message (they can't do any better so it's just fuck and suck and away they go). However, even they rarely if ever do the demeaning self cuckolding wimpy husband who pimps out his wife whore and watches with glee or cheers her fuckings if she gets home in 3 to 5 days while he watches her children.
So my conclusion is that you are likely addictive to that lowest form of sorid non-erotic deviancy and feel compelled to preach it here for converts to keep you company - to support your non-human convention absurdities.
I hope I'm wrong but you persist with perverted consistancy in spite of my requests to showcase your talents in some other theme with either respect or consequence if you insist on marital. It's a bit frustrating to see wasted talent only for the few sicko's when it could arouse the majority and entertain as well. You could blow away most writers here if you tried! Sad in a sense but it is the choice you have made so far - again please think about it eh. Earnit- credibility that is! without Regard (so far)
It gets old reading complaints from people who know what your subject matter is, hate the subject, and still read the story. Did they think they might like it this time? People give it a rest. If you don't like the subject matter avoid the story, it's that simple.
Or maybe the complainers lives are so pathetic they just enjoy bitching.
The bad comments that seem to follow Bobs every story are about the subject matter itself being "sick", or babbling about "pathetic excuses for men" or "turning your wives into whores". The comments are not about the ending.
I have read 80-90% of Bob's stories & love every one of them.
For those of you who don't like the fact that my stories all seem to have the same ending I can only say two things: You either haven't read all my stories or you lack patience. I started writing stories in 2001 and to date have posted over 500 on various sites (so far only 140 on literotica). Less than a third of them have 'wimpy' endings. Eventually they will all appear on literotica, but a story sent in to literotica can take up to ten days before they post it (the average is five) and at that rate it will be six years before they are all there. Even that isn't true though because I write about one a week so the chances are that I will never get them all up on literotica. That said, I rarely invite public comment because I don't care what anyone else has to say about my stuff. I write for my own personal enjoyment and then I offer to share. So, if you like it thank you and if you don't - tough shit!
Love your stuff! Your detractors don't get it...It's fantasy! A slut, cum, cock hungry wife is a serious turn on. A wimpy husband who is torn between anger and horniness and is powerless to stop it is also a serious turn on.
Two plot recommendations, do something with pregnancy and with husband trying her lover's cocks on for size (BJ) either on purpose or by mild force.
by
Anonymous01/12/06
Great Story: More Please
I sm one who likes this type of story. And I also like ones where wifey presents hubby a lovechild to raise from her extramarital liasons. Hope you take this one or others like it into that arena.
hot story!!! and it's only that, nothing else..... absolutely nothing else... i completely agree with the person of 'Sadly depressing....' comment... one of ur incest stories, i can't remember the name, but, the central character was Helen, that story changed my view of life.... it was greatly encouraging not to let ur loved one go away....
but, when i am reading ur stories, these types, of course, some of them get me sexually aroused, but, exactly then, i get turned off, because, ur approach to the matter is almost like preaching... and, i ardently abhored ur arrogance in the comment saying that u don't care about what others think... that's a very low way to get away with ur low-moralizing stories.... if u understand behaviourism quite well, then, u should know that we do care about what others say or not... whatever it's ur life, and stories, we can only suggest or request, can't compel you... but, again, u are greatly demoralizing values of human hearts...
human beings or particularly woman are not only cock-suckers, and sluts.... possessiveness is the main component of love, if u have to know, may be, primitive component, but the best one....
Sayonara!!!!
by
Anonymous07/10/06
Waiting allright
I'd be waiting for the whore with a sawed off shotgun. I'd have her strip, cut her nipples off, cut her face up, cut off an ear, then shove the shotgun up her used up cunt and pull the trigger. Bob, do you let everyone fuck your wife?
by
Anonymous07/30/08
slut husband?
reading this, i thought he should explore more than she. at least get a feeling for it. i wounder how she would react to that ? good for her, not for him ?
by
Anonymous02/06/09
slut wife
Terrible!! Discusting!!!!!
by
Anonymous06/08/09
When does he realize he doesnt have a wife
any longer. He just furnishes a home for a woman who fucks around.
Please ,do everyone a favor and run in front of a bus.You are a really pathetic excuse for a writer and not to mention Man or should I say a wimpy sissy!
Cum-bag. She went from a loving wife, but with a totally lame-brain idea, to a Cum-queen who can't get enough men to satisfy her. You made him into a wuss, from a man who rightfully doubted the intelligence of this idea in the first place. You gave both these characters a total mental reversal. In other words they are both doing something alien to them. People don't normally do this unless the are under extreme duress.
She's a slut. His slut or other mens slut. It makes no difference. Aside from the health issues of what she might bring home, do you REALLY think his ego could stand up to her constantly fucking other men? And what happens when the 5 becomes 10? And the 10 become 20? There's no end in sight and for his mental health along with his physical health, it's time to divorce the cheating wife and look for someone that might actually stay true to their weddings vows of forsaking all others. Time to find a divorce lawyer and move on. His marriage is toast.
by
Anonymous10/29/14
Comments crack me up!
This is who JPB is. One story will have a husband throwing a cheating wife out. The next story will have the husband in the closet watching his wife get gang banged. Like it, hate it, it's not going to change. And for those of you expecting a sequel? Don't make me laugh. Look at JPB's story list. Ever see him come back and write a sequel? I don't think so. This is just another of Bob's wimpy husband, slut wife stories. Don't like it? (I didn't). Move on to the next story. Eventually you'll find one or two stories to your liking. But to expect a sequel or to think Bob won't write more crap like this one is delusional on the readers part. CHEERS!
English
yOU ARE A SICK FUCK.
pLEASE READ THE TITLE.
why so hard on women and weak men
you are saying in your writing all women are sluts and hubby go along with it.i for one don't like whorish women and wouldn't stay with one.you write well,but the content of all women are slut sucks.
To hell with the nay sayers,
i've read your stories for a year. love all of them. not my normal cup of tea, but emotional and entertaining. would have commented sooner, but you usually have this section turned off. you have your own type of story and style of writing, and i like them both, keep up the good work. a fan always.
Bullshit
You are a sick motherfucker.
Don't mind the Jihadists...
Well written as always (one line stood out... "thinking of what'll get into you" or somesuch). The formatting is professional, the plot well thought out.
As for the flamers, you'd think they'd have a clue by the title of the story. I'm guessing they've got self-esteem issues.
It's got a gradual building to it, situationally at least. Each episode tops the last and you give a good kicker at the end. Not much in the sensual department, but that's fairly common for the genre and nothing to be worried about.
It's not your typical M.O., but if you're up for the challenge, it might be fun to see how they progress over her next few episodes. Sequels are hard – but this one would be worth it.
No shit enough is enough
Bob give it a rest. The stories are stupid and tired....PLEASE for all our sakes
Please Please Continue.
I haven't been reading all of your stories like I once did. I've enjoyed them and enjoyed this one very much. I know you don't worry about the negative feedback - hell, it's in the Loving Wives section. What do they expect.
As for this situation I find it arousing to say the least. And if my wife asked me for the same freedom I'm not sure I wouldn't give it to her (after the initial shock of course). I mean, doesn't the relationship go beyond just the physical? Doesn't she deserve to enjoy herself to the fullest? And that has nothing to do with my ability as a husband/lover. The fact that it's done in the open makes it almost reasonable just as long as both parties are in agreement. Hell, I've just about convinced myself that she needs a boyfriend.
No real man would put up with,
"Dinner is in the microwave"! She asked about the sex and he said "OK". A mutual decision. Strange but wierdly common.
Fixing his own meals was never mentioned. It's time to put his foot down now, before it's too late! He's going to end up with a life filled with left-overs and self service.
BOB
I agree with the anon. poster who said give it a rest. I haven't read all your stories, mostly because they are all the same shittin' assed thing day in and day out. Man, can't you do something out of character just once? Every story story is a weak-assed husband (and yeah you real life husbands who do this shit are weak assed too!) and a good for nothing except being a slack-assed cum bucket wife! (And you wives out there who do this shit need a one-way ticket to a nice Muslim nation and let's see how long you last!) Bob, can't you try to broaden your thinking just once? Structurally, your writing isn't bad, just tedious! I would have thought with the crappy votes you get you would have tried a different tack by now!
What man, writing those three stories where
the husband displayed a backbone and didn't put up with a slut's shit do you in? Are you sure you're not from the UK? It's been nothing but slut-wives and pussy husbands for quite some time.
I know you can write a story that doesn't feature a useless husband (good phrase Chagrined:)). You are a fine technical writer with a great turn of phrase. Your subject matter is amusing (at least to me) but it seems as if you are beating a dead horse.
Above average..
Keep writing. The lynch mob has no clue what they're talking about. Stay positive and keep writing.
Sadly Depressing & Hardly Erotic
This comment opening wasn't accidental was it bobbie. The shame is you have talent - the double shame is you know it and still only write for the few pussies - the few wimps who as jaded as they are need your self cuckolding male humiliation injection to feel pitifully subhuman enough to get it up and off. Does it also affect you that way writer?
While I have little regard for a lesser talent having to write short jack off pieces - but since it's really all he or she is capable of - they are largely ignored with just a low score as a message (they can't do any better so it's just fuck and suck and away they go). However, even they rarely if ever do the demeaning self cuckolding wimpy husband who pimps out his wife whore and watches with glee or cheers her fuckings if she gets home in 3 to 5 days while he watches her children.
So my conclusion is that you are likely addictive to that lowest form of sorid non-erotic deviancy and feel compelled to preach it here for converts to keep you company - to support your non-human convention absurdities.
I hope I'm wrong but you persist with perverted consistancy in spite of my requests to showcase your talents in some other theme with either respect or consequence if you insist on marital. It's a bit frustrating to see wasted talent only for the few sicko's when it could arouse the majority and entertain as well. You could blow away most writers here if you tried! Sad in a sense but it is the choice you have made so far - again please think about it eh. Earnit- credibility that is! without Regard (so far)
Nice
It gets old reading complaints from people who know what your subject matter is, hate the subject, and still read the story. Did they think they might like it this time? People give it a rest. If you don't like the subject matter avoid the story, it's that simple.
Or maybe the complainers lives are so pathetic they just enjoy bitching.
Very HOT!
Is she using birth control with these guys? Maybe the slut wants to be a mommy with one of them? That would make these fantasy stories highly erotic!
To hustle13
Not all JPB's stories end like this, this is why I keep an eye on every story he posts. Too bad all of the new ones are the same.
whatever ryu77
The bad comments that seem to follow Bobs every story are about the subject matter itself being "sick", or babbling about "pathetic excuses for men" or "turning your wives into whores". The comments are not about the ending.
I have read 80-90% of Bob's stories & love every one of them.
JPB Comments on Comments
For those of you who don't like the fact that my stories all seem to have the same ending I can only say two things: You either haven't read all my stories or you lack patience. I started writing stories in 2001 and to date have posted over 500 on various sites (so far only 140 on literotica). Less than a third of them have 'wimpy' endings. Eventually they will all appear on literotica, but a story sent in to literotica can take up to ten days before they post it (the average is five) and at that rate it will be six years before they are all there. Even that isn't true though because I write about one a week so the chances are that I will never get them all up on literotica. That said, I rarely invite public comment because I don't care what anyone else has to say about my stuff. I write for my own personal enjoyment and then I offer to share. So, if you like it thank you and if you don't - tough shit!
Love it!
Love your stuff! Your detractors don't get it...It's fantasy! A slut, cum, cock hungry wife is a serious turn on. A wimpy husband who is torn between anger and horniness and is powerless to stop it is also a serious turn on.
Two plot recommendations, do something with pregnancy and with husband trying her lover's cocks on for size (BJ) either on purpose or by mild force.
Great Story: More Please
I sm one who likes this type of story. And I also like ones where wifey presents hubby a lovechild to raise from her extramarital liasons. Hope you take this one or others like it into that arena.
Damn Hot
Hope she gets to use her list. Hot story Bob.
BOb!!!!!!
hot story!!! and it's only that, nothing else..... absolutely nothing else... i completely agree with the person of 'Sadly depressing....' comment... one of ur incest stories, i can't remember the name, but, the central character was Helen, that story changed my view of life.... it was greatly encouraging not to let ur loved one go away....
but, when i am reading ur stories, these types, of course, some of them get me sexually aroused, but, exactly then, i get turned off, because, ur approach to the matter is almost like preaching... and, i ardently abhored ur arrogance in the comment saying that u don't care about what others think... that's a very low way to get away with ur low-moralizing stories.... if u understand behaviourism quite well, then, u should know that we do care about what others say or not... whatever it's ur life, and stories, we can only suggest or request, can't compel you... but, again, u are greatly demoralizing values of human hearts...
human beings or particularly woman are not only cock-suckers, and sluts.... possessiveness is the main component of love, if u have to know, may be, primitive component, but the best one....
Sayonara!!!!
Waiting allright
I'd be waiting for the whore with a sawed off shotgun. I'd have her strip, cut her nipples off, cut her face up, cut off an ear, then shove the shotgun up her used up cunt and pull the trigger. Bob, do you let everyone fuck your wife?
slut husband?
reading this, i thought he should explore more than she. at least get a feeling for it. i wounder how she would react to that ? good for her, not for him ?
slut wife
Terrible!! Discusting!!!!!
When does he realize he doesnt have a wife
any longer. He just furnishes a home for a woman who fucks around.
jeezus
Please ,do everyone a favor and run in front of a bus.You are a really pathetic excuse for a writer and not to mention Man or should I say a wimpy sissy!
What a Total...
Cum-bag. She went from a loving wife, but with a totally lame-brain idea, to a Cum-queen who can't get enough men to satisfy her. You made him into a wuss, from a man who rightfully doubted the intelligence of this idea in the first place. You gave both these characters a total mental reversal. In other words they are both doing something alien to them. People don't normally do this unless the are under extreme duress.
utter shit what a perverted wimp
THREE WORDS AND AN IF
PACK YOUR BAGS----IF----TK U MLJ LV NV
Go for it?
She's a slut. His slut or other mens slut. It makes no difference. Aside from the health issues of what she might bring home, do you REALLY think his ego could stand up to her constantly fucking other men? And what happens when the 5 becomes 10? And the 10 become 20? There's no end in sight and for his mental health along with his physical health, it's time to divorce the cheating wife and look for someone that might actually stay true to their weddings vows of forsaking all others. Time to find a divorce lawyer and move on. His marriage is toast.
Comments crack me up!
This is who JPB is. One story will have a husband throwing a cheating wife out. The next story will have the husband in the closet watching his wife get gang banged. Like it, hate it, it's not going to change. And for those of you expecting a sequel? Don't make me laugh. Look at JPB's story list. Ever see him come back and write a sequel? I don't think so. This is just another of Bob's wimpy husband, slut wife stories. Don't like it? (I didn't). Move on to the next story. Eventually you'll find one or two stories to your liking. But to expect a sequel or to think Bob won't write more crap like this one is delusional on the readers part. CHEERS!
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