All Comments on 'Becoming a Slut Wife: Tina'

by Just Plain Bob

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wetapapwetapapover 18 years ago
you keep on

writing them, I’ll keep on reading them. A fan always.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Your Kingdom For Someone

in your stories who isn't an asshole! Everybody loses - it's so constant and sad.

sex4u4647sex4u4647about 18 years ago
Keep things "HARD"

Loved it. What I can't understand is the ass's that read then bitch. If they don't like fuck stories, don't read them. Nothing better than 2, 3, 4, or more people having great sex together. Write more. Ron

ChagrinedChagrinedabout 18 years ago
"I love the bitch"??

Two things, PJB:

You are consistent in that your writing is a tad above the other examples we get around here.

And EVERYONE in your stories is a piss poor, sorry excuse for a human being and serve as the best reason for retroactive abortion going. After a half century of living one thing I know is that you don't call people you love "bitch" or treat them like a piece of shit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Sorry she wasnat a bitch she was a dumb slimy

slut bitch to concerned with her own ego.

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
1*

Unrealistic garbage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sorry but this was garbage

No worse betrayal than one involving family. Just plain bad!

christmas_apechristmas_apealmost 8 years ago

hideous, yet delicious. sexcellent!

tazz317tazz317almost 7 years ago
A FAMILY AFFAIR

and Incest is still the Best, TK U MLJ LV NV

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Bob

Every time I think your stories have but bottom, you come back and dig a little deeper.

WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

What a lowlife cunt.

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 3 years ago
No.

It reminds me of reading Bukowski - it leaves me needing a shower.

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Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...

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