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Oh God
last six lines ~ Simple enough for me to understand, but so devilishly delicious.
a small poem that speaks volumes....
as many of your offering do! Bravo!
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Guess the thermometer will have to do.
Watch that weed's burning visage...
:)
the first three lines are magical. I love the way the words feel in my head. I enjoy your looks inward and reflections outward, on life and earth. thanks for this one :)
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I especially loved this line:
In the oil can with broken crutches, newsprint
and dry milk boxes, we burn the vines with five leaves.
Great imagry!
Curiouswife
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"Your interpretations are self-inflicted"
Short build to the last line but packed with vivid images.
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