All Comments on 'Finding Danielle'

Scouries, and you didn't tell me? This story is beautiful, a testimony of love between family, even if it is kinky love...lol. Great story, and fantastic surprise. So of course, you got a five from me..lol.

Very tender theme....the violence was not a turn off!

IF ONLY IT WERE TRUE IT WOULD BE A GREAT LOVE STORY , SADLY IT'S JUST A GREAT INCEST STORY . I STILL CANNOT FIGURE OUT WHY HE HAD HIS MIND MADE UP BEFOREHAND THAT HE WAS GOING TO FUCK HIS SISTER ??

WALLACE

Yeah, I couldn't figure him out fully, either. And I took the 'reluctance' knowing she'd go for him, eventually - and that there was a love behind it all!

You tell a great story, scouries.

The characters actions seemed almost random rather than following from motivations based on any rational thought processes.

This is by far your best work, I believe. I know DK will like it too. I hope she posts her side of this soon. Keep up the good work.

So, this guy introduces himself to his long lost sis by RAPING her? Then, she learns that her rapist is her brother? Naturally she marries him the next day. This is well beyond absurd!!

Your usual high standard. After praise from DANIELLEKITTEN my praise can have little value. Keep up the good work.

and of course i knew i would since it was under Daniellekittens recommendations...gawd i luv that woman and her work. i'm very happy to have found this story and know some people who will love reading this also...too bad they don't have a 10 cause this is a 10++++. Thank you for sharing your wonderful work with your readers, you've gained a new one. respectfully a new fan in Texas naynay

Yes I did, particularly your intro about how the story came about. I love that in a writer. Hope Danielle does write the flipside of the story. Anyways, I gave it a five!

While I can tell your writing is strong, your characters are a little off... maybe it's just my personal preference, but they're unbelievable, and slightly on the idiotic side. Again, that could be just my opinion.... they seem whiny, unintelligent and socially inaedquate to the characteristics you place upon them.

I love this story good going if any asshole or bitch says this story sucks then don't listen to them they know nothing about good stories

Good story for one thats so random. Also kinda funny. Perhaps you should have made it longer.

Loved your storie.

The structure of your tale was great. you covered all the bases. If you had wanted to write a 10 part story you could have developed and filled in some of the gaps. ie He and his mother left town to setup housekeeping; but when he returned with a sister/wife Mom had no disappointment.

Greta story thanks

Fabulous story - one of the very best i have read. So hard to find such wonderful meaning stories anywhere. Keep up the great work.

I give you high points for writing a story that reads well, and the sex was really hot...but I give you low points for the storyline, which personally, I felt was mediocre..I know it was marked incest and I have nothing against it, but the rape, the bugging of his sis's apartment, having a child with his mother, and 'marrying' both women...seems ridiculous to me..not to mention the illicit sex on the side with anyone who'll have him. His child is probably mentally deranged due to its parents sharing the same genetic structure.

It was a really good story, usually I don't read stories in this catagory but this was marked as one of the favorite of daniellekitten, and therefor I read it. Liked it a lot:) Hope you have more posted as I would like to read more of your writing:)

you are righ there again great story content and enthraling. homer.

As usual. Typical pattern, typical dialogue that is too banal as to suggest no real forethought on the author's part. Some of the scenes were good, tho, but the obvious failings of writing overshadoweed much of it. 'NOOOOOOOOO'

Great storyline. What a good young man. Eerily mature beyond his years; which can be quite turn on. Good short story - all the essential details without being too wordy or delving into too much back story.

It was a wonderful story and I thought is was perfect. I thought that the whole rape part was over the top but other than that it was good. If only at the end u could've had all 3 of them make love 2gether and then have Dani have his baby. To some of the other guys, Rod didn't marry his mother just his sis. 1 more thing, the girls name is the same as mine. Dani

another great story - thank you Jena121

another great story - thank you - Jena121

typical of the drivel of a low class, gutless creep masquerading as a writer. There is not one original thought in this entire puking up of words.

Great story man! I really liked the part where the brother saves his mom & then his sister.

the rape scene, didn't think it was necessary for this story.

SILLY STORY....

I love your stories...I would love to see you publish a book of short stories or some novellas on this same theme... bravo, you are truly a marvelous writer.

This started off at a 4.0 and held it until he got to Sturgis. At that point he either gave it to his kid brother to finish or relapsed back into a 14 year old. There were a few moments after that that didn't SUCK ASS, but not many.

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this is a really good story....i give it a 5....this was a well put story...i enjoyed it

each Scouries submittal in great contrast to the overwhelming majority that praises his work. It seems as if there are one or two (or perhaps one and the same) persons that just have to leave a degrading comment (and probably a low score) for each one. There is no evidence that they even read the stories. I liken them to ambulance chasers, looking for the opportunity to gain some sort of advantage. Knowing nothing about the politics or rules or scoring of Literotica, I cannot imagine what advantage they get other than knocking down a rival. There must be some agenda - otherwise I'd think they'd just skip all Scouries stories. Well, I haven't found one yet that I've given less than a 5 because I like good erotic porn. I don't give a damn if they don't seem to mirror real life as some seem to need to give a good score. This is fiction, let me repeat that, this is erotic fiction; we expect exaggeration - all heroes have huge cocks, all heroines are gorgeous with beautiful tits and are ready to jump into bed with nearly anyone they have just met. Etc. Etc. Look, as long as I can understand the plot and I don't fall asleep and I have some erotic image in my mind as I read it, I will most always like it. I overlook grammar and spelling and some other stuff that wouldn't be a problem if the work was done for commercial reasons, but these works of art are done for us, you and me, and we should appreciate that someone, like Scouries, does it. All he wants is our appreciation, and from me, he gets it. There's not much entertainment out there that's free, that keeps my arousal up, and that I enjoy, so every time I read any submittal on this site, I will give a five because I appreciate the effort. OK, if it really stinks, I will give a 4, but I want the artist to keep painting the picture. And, there are many ways to paint the same scene, so let's don't castigate anyone for telling stories that we might have heard before, told a different way, to a different conclusion. Let's just read for enjoyment and thank the authors for their contributions.

I fucking LOVED it, sick fuck that I am! LOL! I always thought a love between members of the same family could so outshine that of others from different realms...I mean, how could you NOT love and adore your own flesh and blood? And FUCK NO, I am NOT gonna admit to any of this openly! LOL!

DUDE HOLY SHIT PLEASE WRITE more like this story it was very well written

OMG! THAT WAS SO FUCKING WRONG, BUT IT WAS SO RIGHT! I LOVED IT!! AND MY TITLE IS TRUE! I'D LOVE FOR THAT TO HAPPEN TO ME! HOLY SHIT THAT WAS SO FUCKING GOOD! LIKE SHIT! OH MY GOSH IT'S AMAZING!

That was a fucken awesome story.... loved it keep writing and I hope you will write some more bout Rod and Danielle...

I can't understand why anyone would ever give any author less than a 4 & Scouries anything but a 5 for the often wonderful (or ocasionally disturbing) but very erotic stories! Everyone deserves a good mark for taking their time to put their imaginations, hopes, desires or possibly just wishful thinking on here for the enjoyment & titillation of others!

(just find it frustrating at the moment as the rating system seems to not be there!)

Although in real life i have no interest in incest (probably as my brothers & sister are not particularly nice people) i do however find myself excited at the thought of my son taking & loving my wife exciting, more so if it were to be anything like the tender & loving ways in which Scouries often describes!

Scouries, please keep writing your excellent, excitingly erotic stories as i look forward to reading them all!

NK

you need more of this group so whats next

A really, really good story. I love sexy stories with happy endings.

Please continue this story. It is very erotic

Thank's

Erich

This story practically screams, "To be continued...".

For the love of God, please do!!!

omg this is the best fucking story ever i was given up for adoption when i was a baby too and i finally have found my family again! thanks for the encouragement

I was not moved at all with the rape scenes in the story! However, it was very well written and I appreciate that in the story.

There must have been a way for the siblings to meet without the rape. I know, it fit well into the fantasies written by the sister, but lets face it, rape is still rape and if he wanted a good relationship with his sister, rape is not the most optimal way to start it.

please write a second chapter, this was really good.

Got to agree with joemac77792064. The rape part of the story was not at all necessary. Otherwise pretty damn good.

Handyman2

There used to be a show on tv called the "Locator". It is amazing how twins raised apart look alike, marry similar spouses and usually live closer to one another. The same thing holds true for many adoptions - files can be reopened if the birth mother is seeking her child. Some reunions work out great - others don't. This one did.

Would like to see an incest story on twins who find their partners who are really their sisters.

This story started really well but as soon as he for some reason came in his pants in the street upon seeing his sister for the first time and immediately decided he wanted his new found sister to have his children??? from that point on it became to retarded and contrived for me to take his story seriously, kinda disappointing 'cos the relationship between him and his mother was really hot and well written but i had to tap out about half way into page two. shame.

More. Cant thé systern wife get pregnant to! And moms again and thé son/ brother husband get titt Milk from 4 titss, and herr marrys möter to B

Like most everything you write, I'm so damn horney now. Think I'll go see Mom at work. She likes me to eat what she has ready for me. She's 72, so what I munch on might be considered leftovers but really well seasoned. Better, really than my wife. But she's known from the first that Mommy always came first. Had the nubile pleasures of MY sister too until her job moved her away. Now she's just Christmas and Thanksgiving. Family love is such joy, and the stories you write are soo good. I hope you've known it in real life. Thank You, I'm so hard.

The rape bit seemed out of place and unnecessary in this story. Other than that a good story .

George in Omaha

beautiful wish there was more to this story

Well, I was skeptical when you warned non-concent, but the story was really good! ....I can't read enough erotica this evening though...I went to my favorite smoke shop today and my favorite girl was working today! (Unfortunately there was another girl there too and she's usually kinda grumpy;). My favorite girl is this drop dead gorgeous asian hottie! ...well I thought I'd flirt a bit when I walked in today, but when I saw her I was totally caught off guard and everything I was thinking kind of floated out the window... Low and behold, my favorite asian girlie was pregnant! Swollen up ready to pop pregnant! She looked HoT too! Wearing a skin tight white t-shirt that followed every curve of her sexy round belly and big, full breasts! She said she was eight months along and didn't really start showing till about six.

Some women look hot while pregnant and others just look fat... She is definitely hot! I wanted to bend her over her desk in the back office, eat that pussy out good, then fuck the daylights out of her! I wont need smoke supplies for a few months (liquid smoke and mod smoking gear) but I just have to go back up there and visit with that girl ;). ...I texted my wife and told her my asian girlfriend was pregnant, hehehe ;) ...when I go back up Im going to tell her thats what I told my wife and see her reaction!

Very nicely told, you really know how to tell a good story !

Very moving story. One of your best

Can I just say:

GODDAMMIT! Amazingly told! Beautiful story! Awesome! Rod is now my favorite character of all time!

that is one hot & wild story, I just loved it, it is such a shame that mom couldn't married too, I think another 2 ceremonies is in order, mom gets married to her daughter, then gets married her son, so all 3 are married to each other, while they all have fun making babies or just practicing making babies, an I would just love to there when they all tied the knot, with a big shit-eating grin on my face, while being their live-in house male maid, nanny, butler, & video cameraman.

Is really a good story but it could have been better. It was rushed and you could have used so much more detailed. More back ground.

I get that this is fantasy but at least try to make it some what believable.

You old tear jerker you.

Comple lack of anything to make a good story. I have to wonder about anyone who thinks rape is a good basis for a story.Try writing another one.

Absolutely LOVE your story, and your writing style.

One of the hottest and well written stories in here. well done. Please write some more

so, rape, incest and marriage all in 36 hours, must be some record even for this site. sooo unbelievable.

Dude seriously write a sequel this story is amazing

but it all got too silly for words. Surely all fiction must have some degree of believeability in it otherwise it fails in its purpose.

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we need another chapter

Loved the story, but I have to say that the most unrealistic part was the route they took back to Miami. How often can you say that about a story on this site? Seriously? Why the hell would they be going through West Virginia and South Carolina? I 75 would have taken them basically entire way. It goes from Detroit to Miami. They must have added like 12 hours to the drive.

I know it's a weird thing to be hung up on but it really took me aback when I read that.

You are One of My top ten writers here .. Please keep up the great work

The world (like the readers on this site) is made up of people with widely varying likes and dislikes. My take on that: To each their own.

So, in this story the main character rapes his sister, marries her and takes her home to their mother----who had previously been impregnated by him and given birth to their daughter----and in the same two day period, along the way, since no woman can resist him, he bangs every woman he meets an extraordinary number of times each day and night. OK, it's fiction, of which there is all kinds. I like my fiction with some basis in reality, some plausibility to the plot, a little authenticity to the characters. To all those who lavished superlatives on this story and gave it 5 stars I say, Right on! You are entitled to your opinion and because it's yours it's not wrong. For me, this story was worth 1 star. Scouries: Keep writing. You have avid fans.

Finding Danielle. And Emily’s Xmas Milk. Were both. WONDERFUL. Thanks

As usual a very good story. You always have a delightful way of mixing sibling in a loving caring way for each of them. As far as this story, I wasn't happy with the way it ended. They're settled in, but I'd like to experience more of their relationship together.

Love this story. Hope u will ADD more. Life together will be interesting reading.

...all I could think was, twenty million bucks and the dude couldn't afford to fly first class and rent a car when he got there? ROFL!

To the idiot who wrote the post below. It'called maintaining a low profile and not attracting attention. Anyone who is ex military or police will understand

Some of your own real life, or just a writer's dream?

From all of son/bro's actions/mannerisms I get the feeling he can't possibly older than 13 yrs old. Beyond silly story.

I like the story even if it is a bit silly at times. AAA+++

Okay then, I guess the rape angle was handled by her fetish. I've done a great deal of reading on these sites and I'm sure the the Author could have done the sex scenes a bit better, maybe with more use of his imagination. I'm absolutely sure he is capable of doing so.

didn't need the rape. He could have seduced her instead

Do not take this as criticism. I have enjoyed many of your stories. I did enjoy the premise. But, you missed am opportunity on Goshen. A very large Amish population lives there and drives their horse and buggies all over town. Would have introduced a quick moment. I also understand that you had to keep the plot moving as well.

I was enjoying your story until he raped her. That was a turnoff for me as I don't like guys that think they are hot shit and can do what ever they want to a woman. Sorry but for the story I was gonna go with five stars until he raped his sister. Even if she was reading stories about it he had no right. Two stars.

I do agree a little with the critics, but it was in her fantasies she wrote. Of course another way would also have been fine, it seems he could get anyone in his pants anyway...

At least a happy end...

Absolutely did not like this story. He has no redeeming qualities. I skimmed almost the entire story and it wasn't at all anything I would read again. I have read several of your stories and this was my least favorite of all.

How can Dani be the little sister!!

FUCKING TRASH ending....let Dani and Rod be together

WTF,this would’ve been a ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Story but the rape scene ruined it for me ⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Sexcelllent!

11/10!!!!!

Far from your best story. The rape scene was totally unnecessary...

Second time I read it, it's a strange story yes, I did like it, but it's not really my thing, the rape and forceful sex thing. Still 5 stars again...

I love the Scouries stories. I had forgotten he has a history with Michigan.

Great story. Loved all the twists. I see people were unhappy with the rape thing, but come on..... it's a story..... I get it. Thanks for the fun adventure.