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My favorite of the day. You have such a way with words.
Curiouswife
Wow
trademark language twists and wonderful story telling. Good job, 4d!
Fly
Fantastic
This sounds slick to my ear as it tumbles off my tongue.
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That almost unique 4° style ~
I say almost because lobomao frequently seems to reflect him.
Strangely obsolete.
This poem makes you want to wade out until you reach the deep waters of understanding. A little Poetic Gem!
fifty nine of anything
Tearing into the fleshy bits of mind
he stirs
fifty nine pounds
of dead weight
fifty nine days till
he arrives
the heaviness
gravity's dispute
with your will
fifty nine reasons
not to care
but i still do
fifty nine years,
one might think it makes sense
it only makes feelings
the push in the plexes
the moment of satori
moment i touch its skin
fifty nine thoughts
to the back of the bus
fifty nine steps to get
back off
there it is
numbered fifty nine
in this town
of desolation
the signs point
the right direction
an old archaic route
little travelled
AN OUTLOOK
of confusional metaphors. TK U MLJ LV NV
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