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What a nice wake-up call;
another of cymry's pithy writes.
Profound
A profound little poem. Read it and be awed.
illustrating write
in vision is shape and form in order to absorb the write of this excellent literary creation. (~_*)
it certainly does....
and it's nice and tight......nicely done.....don
Confusion ~
You take words, toss the, flip them then
confuse them. The words ... confused.
I love how you paint with your words. Your imagery is always tight and perfect. Seems to be right on, everytime. I love it !!!
I mean that. You have a style that leaves me in awe, and I am honored to see it at work on the threads and here ... Just amazing~!!
You are getting better and better...
not a word wasted in this little masterwork!
form of a spiral
very clever..nothing wasted not even space...blue
Very compact for the ideas expressed
I understand Cruinne to mean "World", and the shape of the poem is not a circle, spiral, orb or anything else, it is... the World!
I particularly like the phrase "discharging ideals from
the static where they hide" - it is very evocative. "A spark exhumes the dead dreams of hope into a new living future for the world!)
Am I reading something into your poem? It is so compact yet complex!
Beautifully told as all your poems are!
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