My husband and I have enjoyed every chapter of all of your stories. This was the perfect ending to an erotic and yet interesting story. I hope you find a way to visit Rose again in the future. I loved the romance and we both loved the incredible sex. Once again, you gave us a hot morning after reading your story together. Thank you.
I wish I had a Bob in my life lol....Awesome series.....
This whole series has been outstanding, but it really needed the last chapter to complete the story and turn it into the romantic tale that it was meant to be. Thank You. Ronnie W.
All of a sudden, we find out that her husband's been cheating, which makes her cheating more palatable. NOT! Seems like the author's trying to manipulate the backstory, but not very adroitly.
I am a woman who has loved this entire series and I also wish I had a "Bob". The comment about the cheap way out angered me. Things like this happen in real life, I know. Fiction should take us places we have not been, not match our own little narrow views and fantasies. This is an arousing story to masturbate to.....and it has real human interest. Some people are too critical. Why read erotica if you have to impose your own morals on everything?
Your fan, Karen
I've only read #6 but i found it sexually stimulating and romantic. HOT!!!
Regarding an earlier comment, I didn't realize that there were only certain times when people discovered others infidelities. Live and learn. I thought it was a wonderful story that brought everything together. Look forward to more from you B.
THIS WAS A GREAT STORY,LOVED EVERY CHAPTER,VERY SEXY AND SENSUAL,WISH I COULD FIND MY OWN ROSE
At last a true love story, for adults, not teenagers.
An amazing journey of two people who needed love and found it with each other. Nothing else matters. Excellent series! Made me want to know more. SanAntonioRose
Oh what a wonderful story. I wish it went on and on perhaps of their adventures together. Perhaps you'll write another story, perhaps similar in content but of love a feelings of two people meant to be together.
This story Rose Ch. 1 to 6 was a great read as the combination of Love, Sex and the way you lead into each of their couplings throughout the story was very erotic, not just a quick fuck then carry on.
I enjoyed this story very much and can only hope you write in a similar way in the future
I applaud the concept and nature of this very romantic love story. I also appreciate that the two principals were mature enough and caring enough to enjoy each other and their growing relationship.
There were times it was difficult to figure out who was speaking as you switched voices freely in their interactions. There were also words left out that required rereading to fill in the gaps. And the sentence structure, well, may I suggest having a third party read it. Not to change or alter the storyline, just to look with a fresh eye. As a writer your mind does little tricks on you, it knows what you were thinking and what you meant and skips past the gaps in syntax.
Thank you for writing this. I hope to read more from you soon.
told and well worth the time to read - thanks. I've always loved happy endings...
You couldn't have ended it better. But could send you send them on an awesome, erotic cruise for their honeymoon? LOL. Really, that was a great story. Thanks, your story brought happy tears. By the way, I'm a carpenter by trade and as a hobby, 66 years young and a widower. It made your story that more enjoyable. Maybe I'll get lucky like Bob and meet someone like Rose. Keep writing, I loved it.
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