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by lobomao

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Smile

Tasty although nameless!

mojo_catmojo_catover 18 years ago
it's hard to tell

if you didn't spellcheck the title or if you put it there on purpose, based on the word mashups later in the poem. i can only suggest that you use the word "point" too much in the beginning-there are lots of synonyms available. it's good though, these are nitpicks :)

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
nice metaphor......

despite missing the spelling on tongue.....nicely done.....don

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