All Comments on 'A Bitch in Heat Gets Mounted Ch. 02'

by smy3th

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Sassy SusanSassy Susanover 18 years ago
Terrific

Well done, Mr. Smy3th. Susan

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
FUNNNEEEE

Very descriptive story, I was laughing very hard at the mental picture you drew, up until the kids came in (not cool!). But I sure would have liked to see the look in the telemarketer's face! Also, I was waiting for the fire department to show up after the smoke alarm went off!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great Chuckle

Pricelessly funny! Woke my sub I was laughing so hard. Keep up the good work!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Bedlam revisited!

A wild alternate ending. Mr. Smyth has done himself up proud as well as tickle the hell out of his reader's funny bones. I loved this story as things went wildly out of control. Loved the telemarketer phone call. Great Read. Lottsa fun!

asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
Frustrating and Hilarious at the same time...

Much better thatn Part I

Wonder how it would read if both were fused.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
surprise

Too bad a stranger didn't track her down and avail himself on her charms while she was postin while alone

GmogrosGmogrosabout 11 years ago
Very funny

I laughed a lot

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
more true to life

.was looking forward this part after the hot part 1. this was more true to life as I found out raising 7 kiddos. the first part was HOT HOT HOT!

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