All Comments on 'Motel Maid'

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writingdragonwritingdragonover 18 years ago
Very Nice and a nice gentle twist too!

I really enjoyed this one, as I said nice twist.

davidwattsdavidwattsover 18 years ago
well done

Eureka! A very nice story emerges from a usually cringe-inducing category. It was not degrading to anyone, yet was told with a wink toward silly old stereotypes and with a great deal of humor and self-depreciation. Additonally, there were a couple of nice twists thrown in that made for an unpredictable ending. Very nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great job

Not the most erotic graphic story I've read but certainly one of the best. Had me smiling from almost the start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good

Nice little story. I enjoyed it very much.

Boyd

57chevyman57chevymanover 18 years ago
Very Good

I enjoyed reading your story. It was light and sexy all in one. I wish I could have the good luck in finding the same situation. I believe in would be most pleasurable. Nicely written also. Keep up the great work.

Don GrampaDon Grampaabout 18 years ago
A GREAT STORY

I loved this story. gentle_man is a great writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
More u got the feel

have read a few stories but this is easily one of my better ones

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Loved It!

Just surfing and looking for some good erotica to read. I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Hopefully I'll read another one of your stories soon.

Chocolate Cupcake:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great writing...

I thought it was a wonderful story. Honest... Not everyone is model size or porn hung. I loved the fact that neither of them were perfect....made it sexier somehow.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great Story, Would love to read more from you

I truly loved your story, Keep the writings coming. I look forward to reading more stories from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Uhm.....

I'm sorry but that's just a tad...no a smig gross....but entertaining none the less good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Kudos!

Great story! I was laughing through out the story, but the END was so unexpected and clever! Great read!

BTW... I'm also black, but wasn't offended. Don't take the critics to heart, it was great!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Enjoyed

I liked it a lot

Thank you

SeriniteeSeriniteeover 12 years ago
Loved it!

I could profuse all day, but I'll just say, wow!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Masterfully written tale

Hard to beat a little black pussy from time to time. They know how to fuck; you know how to write.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 11 years ago
Very

Cute. Looking for more on them, soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loved it!!!

Maybe ill get my black pussy fucked like that one day

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Grrrrreat story!

This is one of the most memorable and one of my favs. You are a very talented writer. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wish list

How I wish I could experience something like this too!! Great story

oneboobeeoneboobeeabout 11 years ago
Awesome

This was a great story!!! Loved it.

dirtyomandirtyomanabout 11 years ago
Great!!

I never give a 5rating, but you get the first one!! This was a very enjoyable story. I really really like it. I'm sure I will be back to reread it from time too time.

Now I'm going to look for your other postings. Again Thank You for a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
*****

Five.

cantbuymycantbuymyabout 11 years ago

damn that was nice. 5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Good story lots of humour sah

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
2 stars

I hated it!

cantbuymycantbuymyalmost 11 years ago

Loved it. I guess the last anon is a black man who can't stand a black woman loving a white man.

yukimiyukimiover 10 years ago
that was nice

AND I WANT THEM TO LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER BECAUSE THEY ARE SO SWEET AND DESERVE ONE ANOTHER - YES AND THERE WAS BEAUTIFUL SEX BECAUSE THERE WAS SOMETHING MORE THERE THAN JUST SEX IN THEIR EMBRACE - SO OK THEN - HAPPPILY EVER AFTER IT IS - BECAUSE I HAVE SPOKEN

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

What year was this supposed to be

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great Story with a Twist

The story was well written with a surprise ending. Both characters were well represented and very active. A 5 star rating is well deserved.

KittyOh48KittyOh48about 10 years ago
Cute story!

I liked the story, and if people have a problem with what is written then they can always go to another site. Keep it up....good job!

KamaSutraKatKamaSutraKatalmost 10 years ago
Awesome Development

It was like I was watching a good movie. At first I was turned off by the characterization of her speech, but I got used to it after I decided that it wasn't derisive. Nice twist, which I had first suspected, then was surprised by. Well written.

NawtyMeNawtyMeover 9 years ago
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!

In all honesty, I TOTALLY AGREE with KamaSutraKat, KittyOh48 & Yukimi!!!!,,,,This story was extremely well written, the grammar, tho I'm sure the "southern dialect" might've been a lil difficult at first, but fell into a nice groove. Kudos gentle_man for such a well thought out, well written story. And yes, is there or will there be a follow up story?????

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Beautiful

I don't know she looked like but I would definitely not have said 'no' to fucking Milly

arizonalynnarizonalynnover 8 years ago
Loved it

out5standing story.......love black lady/white guy sex and this is one of the best ever on this site.......he likes all breasts, like I do, but loves pussy bare or full of hair - both can be very sexy.....can we hear what happened the rest of the week? I know it had to be hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Just...why?

Why did you have to make Milly sound like a slave from 1741??? That's just retarded, I was expecting a beautiful romance not this ignorant mess. It was borderline offensive to anyone with two braincells and half a heart let alone a normal human being. Just...no.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

i loved the story. hoping she is young enough. maby the next story could have a white man impregnating her??? mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm think about it. it would be fun

GuyJDGuyJDover 6 years ago
Great story

Keeping this story alive with sequels would be awesome. Maybe the two can form an on going relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Umm...

I'm a black woman from the South, so the way she spoke kinda threw me off at first, but I suspected from the beginning that she was actually Miss Washington. Cute story!

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 3 years ago

I read 14 years ago and vaguely remembered it. Great story!

5

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a great erotic story. I love stories of white men on black women. Black women are so sexy, especially when they are so randy as Miss Washington.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I never write a comment until I completely finish reading a story. I really wanted to quit reading this story, because of the way you wrote the black maids dialogue, as if she were Mammy from Gone Withe the Wind. My desire to comment (negatively) was stronger, forcing me to finish. Ya.... well that was... something. I am not sure how to...........

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The one thing that absolutely broke my suspension of disbelief was how her tooth spontaneously grew back.

Trevithic2Trevithic211 months ago

What a lovely sexy story! It kept me glued to the screen until the very happy ending. Smiles

AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

I have been with woman of color got her pregnant with my kid in her plus had her with my friends we fuck every hole she had did hardcore gangbang with her she screamed yelled for us to stop we just kept on fucking pumping are sperm in heruntil none of could fill her up it was morning time she was sore from double vag and two cocks in her asshole too she been living with me for 3 months get gangbanged every weekend by monday morning worn out then goes to sleep full of sperm

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