All Comments on 'A Pink Slip to Paradise'

Great story. Myself, think more detail during the sex act. What he was feeling? What was the girls feeling? Just a little detail could go a long way. Still a great story. Maybe add more chapters to it.

Quite a hot topic - would like to read more of their escapades!

I really liked your story as it was well-written and quite enjoyable. It seemed to flow really nicely and reminded me of a literary version of a couple of my favorite short video features when one of the more creative producers or directors in Show Biz is in charge. I'll bet that there is a place for you in the Southern California film industry. Maybe not in Hollywood, CA exactly, but not too far away from there in Chatsworth, CA. I would love to see what a brilliant guy like Patrick Collins of Elegant Angel Studios could do with one of your stories. While it's true that this story may have been a little bit predictable, I really did not find that to be a problem. The bottom line for me was that, just exactly like all of my favorite films, your story was reasonably short and had a very happy ending.

then his ex boss' wife and daughter fuck his brains out only for him to find out that his wife is a fuck slut whore - big deal - had he not lost his job he would never have had the mom and daughter fuck him or found out his wife is a total slut - needs to get rid of the bitch as she has obviously been playing away games before she gives him a dose of the pox, STD or AID's - you just cannot trust the bitch women as you never know what they get up to while you work your butt off.

I appreciate hot stories that include an 'aha' moment or two, and this story delivered.

I'm only sorry that there aren't anymore - I could see him starting his own company with his ex-partners wife working for him, maybe even the daughter. Maybe even getting the daughter pregnant?

Loved the 'punch line' !!

That was perhaps the most fun I've seen packed into a one-page story.

Definately wasn't the type of incest I was visualizing when I started reading this one. Question is will Gerry get a Job and will there be a scene between Misty Gerry and Terri and Terri? I sure hope so.

Short and sweet. Loved it.

The story needed more seduction, build up. Too easy to screw the ex boss's wife.

To the last poster... Too easy? Did you read the story? Lol. It was a setup, remember? Heh. Thanks for the fun story!

Add another chapter please starting with the wife's confession and details.

My comment:

When he got the pink slip he thought the life was over. Later the same day he thought he had died & gone to Heaven. At the very end we the readers find out that he has his own guardian angel who will always make his life worth living. He will be a happy person, & happy people do much better at job interviews!

Nicely done

is in the wrong category.

A man's dream comes true..lol

[25.05.23]

hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

I guess the mother/daughter hook up qualifies this good story as incest after all . . . .

Nice