of crystal polished into your shimmering world...nice..I want to write another one like it...sighs...blue
Another excellent poem. I love the images in this poem, so rich in detail. Excellent stuff!
Either way, a creative write!
I like the last phrase "sparkles of mirth" a lot! It leaves a warm feeling.
melded into an appealing poem! This one should have been illustrated, no?
Regretfully, this is just a collection of disjointed, though "colorful," words.
placed and laced
careful on silver strings
moments of memory
pretty precious things
lead bead and rise
to tears concealing
sharp shock shards
the shattered diamond cries
A great little picture you've painted here.
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