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Distance does not matter

bySatin and Lace©
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by My Erotic Tale10/28/05

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passionate write, very sensual feel to these words nice write S~

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by LeBroz10/29/05

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A sensuous, inviting, seductive touch...

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by lobomao10/30/05

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A quiet voice speaks
perhaps it calls out
or perhaps it weeps
so sweet the song
we rapt cannot turn
our ears aside
tears fall light years away
their sparkle reflected in the stars
rate equals distance over time
and yet, somehow in the equation
distance doesn't matter
so there's your proof

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