I like some of the others that have read this great story.feel u need 2 right about bill&cathy .Love it keep them comming.JIM
by
Anonymous02/26/09
Moreee
I love all your stories and this ones no exception! I think you need to continue with it tho. Cathy and bill whenthey started then if cathy ever comes to live with them
by
Anonymous04/12/09
........I LOVED THE STORY...........
.......What a talent you are,...i enjoyed the story,..brought back fond memories....
by
Anonymous04/24/09
Great Erotica
I read a great deal of incest stories and this one is one of the best. The love for both girls is great.
by
Anonymous11/23/09
Concerns
Sir: Only Myanmar ("Burma") and the United States have no legislation to make System Internationale (metric) their basic standard. As for Gayle's discomfort with the metric system Canada, alas, continues to use whatever antiquated systems of measurement currently and widely used by our largest trading partner, as a concession to them.
In another of your stories, a young lady dreams of being attacked by Arabs. Granted dreams are dreams, but I find the reduction of Americans to stereotypically racist/xenophobic nationals. I've enjoyed reading your erotic tales, and find them engaging and entertaining, but I find myself a little perturbed by these kinds of national representations.
Be proud of your country, by all means; the U.S. has a great deal to be proud of, and is where it is on the backs of ethno-racial minorities.
I am the 58th person to leave a comment, and here it is April 20, 2010 and ....
of all those only the anonymous (why won't he/she/it identify himself so we can see if he is the same single derogatory voter who votes against each story) shit who left a comment on 11/1/08 that panned the author, felt the need to go against the overwhelming majority that really enjoyed this work. I am reading Mr. Scouries works from A to the end and have now enjoyed 21 of his treasures. This was undoubtedly the best of his works that I have read thus far. Love and sex, sex and incest, unsaid but hinted at consequences of love and sex and incest, and the possibilities for more (at least in my fantasies) make this the best of the 21 I have read. Because I still have a long way to go to the end of Mr. Scouries submissions, I'm full of hope that this one, however good, however erotic, however full of sex and love, will fall well down my list of favorites by the time I finish. I'll let you know when I find a better one, but for now this story is the best!
by
Anonymous04/23/10
Teasing is not nice!
Didn't your mom tell you that about teasing? Finish the story and let the four of them enjoy a wonderful life together.
I liked your story. I'm wet from it very hard to do from stories on here
by
Anonymous04/26/11
Nice story
I felt the consummation scene with Izzy was a little rushed, but otherwise up to your usual high standards. I look forward to the sequel when Cathy finally succumbs to Izzy's urgings to reconnect with her brother in Montreal. It will be quite a family, with Gayle, Izzy, and Cathy all taking turns at having his children. Monica, doubtless, will make an appearance, as well, bemoaning the fact that Bill is having sex with his "harem", then eventually joining in when she realizes why she actually left him was her fear of Gayle replacing her in Bill's affections.
by
Anonymous09/19/11
Great story! This story deserves more chapters. Can you write more?
by
Anonymous09/19/11
Write more, this story deserves more chapters.
by
Anonymous10/05/11
Saucy, sexy and funny
PLEASE continue the story. I loved the characters and want to read about the whole family , including Cathy , living together.
by
Anonymous11/30/11
fantastic,
love your writing and this is by far no exception. but please finish the story by bringing sweet Cathy back into the story.
by
Anonymous09/19/12
Love it
Slowly but surely working my way through your stories. Keep writing.
by
Anonymous09/27/12
Wondering
Izzy, lying at my side, asked, "Uncle Bill, when you were young, did you ever make love to Mommy?"
I picked up on this possiblity about half way through. Maybe the next part of this will tell the answer
by
Anonymous04/15/13
One of the best stories. Makes me horny each time I read it.
The character buildup on the girls was amazing! I could picture them sooo wel in my head!
by
Anonymous10/01/13
Well Done
This story is superbly written. The innuendos and teasing just build the story so well to the final 'climax' excuse the pun. Hope there are many more to come.
I really like your stories and the way you tell them and this one so far is near the top of the list but it's so hard to say. I really love the way the two girls get along and wiliness to share the father/uncle. So when is there going to be a chapter 2 when the sister gets involved and he has 3 women to satisfy but then they also satisfy each other.
by
Anonymous03/14/14
AUTHOR, PLEASE READ.
I FEEL THAT THERE IS A GOOD COMEDIC PART OF THE STORY BETWEEN COUSINS. BUT THERE DEFINITELY IS A LACK OF CONSISTENCY WITH THE EROTISM PART OF THE STORY.
by
Anonymous06/11/14
eroticism
I must admit i find your stories very easy to read and i love them - i loved this one and the one where the daughter seduces her Dad in Martinique..should you wish to contact me u can at eve.marie.mcdonald@gmail.com
by
Anonymous07/18/14
Liked the erotica and the humor. I hope you write more of these stories!
This is the third time I've read this story and it get's better each time. Normally I prefer stories that are about a loving couple but this is the exception that proves the rule! The three main characters are all well written and the two girls are especially delightful in their relationship with each other. I realise that this is one of your older tomes but if you do ever wish to revisit this story now you are feeling better then I am sure I am not the only one who would enjoy a further chapter of their adventures.
I would never usually presume to suggest how a writer should develop their stories but I this case I would love to see his sister Cathy reunited with Bill and them becoming one big happy throng with maybe a little lesbian action between the two young girls and a baby with each woman to complete their unusual family unit. The chance to expand on the humour that has already been interwoven in their interactions would be almost limitless and could make another chapter (or two as there is so much scope here) even more delightful than the first.
From the comments I read, we, your faithful readers, are all asking for the same thing : Please finish this story.
Imho, with your easy style, not even dragging the story out, you've got at least a couple more chapters waiting to be written.
I understand writing cannot be hurried, but this story is sooo good. It just seems unfinished.
""""The other room on my floor, the big room at the back," I answered. The house had three levels; the ground floor with kitchen, large entry hall, living room, dining room and bathroom; the second floor with three bedrooms, bathroom, a den and a TV room; and finally the top floor, with my large bedroom at the front, an extensive bathroom/spa and a large empty room at the back."""
@@@ damn!! I need his job! ...and his hottie niece ....and his daughter.. Hehe @@@
"""Gayle was spending an ever increasing time at the house and most days I'd return home to find her sitting in the second floor library, curled up on the sofa with a book in front of the fire."""
@@@ ...and he has a library, with a fireplace?! Bastard!! I want! @@@
""""Thanks Daddy," Gayle replied, blushing a deep red. "You know Daddy, before today, I had never seen one before I saw yours, not a real one anyway," she giggled. "Its weird just hanging there like that, it's much different than I thought,"
"Do you want to see him again?" I replied.
"Oh yes Daddy," she replied eagerly and then added, "Can I touch it?" as her fingers lightly moved across my thigh. "Oh, it's big Daddy, so big! They don't look so big in pictures," she murmured as her hand tightened around my now surging meat."""
@@@ Fuuuuuuck, I love that girl!! ;) Im gonna be fantasizing I'm daddy all evening,lol! @@@
""""Gayle," I finally started, my mind an emotional rollercoaster, "We can't do this... it's wrong... I'm sorry sweetie, it's just that... """"
@@@ daddy being a retard... Of course, lol. Girl knows exactly what she wants! @@@
""" "We're going to Aunt Cathy's tomorrow sweetie," I said, as my shaft bounced between our stomachs, "We can't do anything... "
"It's only for eight days Daddy, and then, when we come home... I'm not going to be a virgin in 2004 Daddy," she promised as she slipped to her knees, drawing me into her mouth as I stood helplessly erect, a slave to her ministering lips...
... We left that night for Burlington, as I moved our drive up one day to avoid what I knew would happen if we stayed one more night alone in my house, and arrived before ten to a joyous welcome from Cathy and Izzy. """
@@@ ugh, I hate it when the guy is written in like that! :( @@@
"""Hugging her as if in despair, I started to move my hands and fingers in a frenzy of sexual desire, but she stopped me, saying, "Daddy, I'm ready Daddy, please, put it in me, I'm gushing, pleasssse put him in me, fill your little daughter..""""
@@@ GaWd I love that girl!! @@@
""" I could feel the thin wall, straining to protect its valued canal, struggling to prevent my alien invader from penetrating its owners darkness, but holding her ass firmly I smashed through her defenses, shoving six inches deep in one thrust."""
@@@ O.M.G.!!! An author on this site that ACTUALLY knows where the hymen is!! The world is coming to an end!! @@@
""""It hurt Daddy, still hurts," she grunted. "But a good hurt. Don't take him out Daddy. How much more?" she gasped, and after lifting her head and seeing the amount left, groaned. "Jesus," she moaned as I stroked slowly within her, just letting her feel two thirds of my length. Minutes later I came, flooding my white sauce deep within her, but left my still hard penis within her, letting her continue to adjust to his size."""
@@@an early shooter, that blows! (Yah, cheesy pun!) that would suck, lol... At least he stayed hard though! @@@
"""We came together, both of us screaming like banshees, our orgasms momentarily maddening us, reducing us to rutting beasts. "Jesus," I cried as we fell apart panting, our juices smeared over my softening penis."""
@@@ if I had a buck for every simultaneous orgasm on this website... Lol;) @@@
"""Only you Daddy, only you can put your cock in me now, no one else, ever," she promised, """
@@@ Thats daddy's girl!! ;) @@@
"""As she came, sobbing as my both hands continued to massage her, I moved down between her legs and like Gayle before her lifted her hips up, lining her pussy's now sopping lips with my shaft."""
@@@ ...seriously though, where the hell are these girls that cum from you playing with their nipples?! I want a few of those! @@@
"""As I rammed again and again into her clenching tunnel, I"""
@@@ damn, again with the ramming! Yeesh! @@@
"""Uncle Bill, when you were young, did you ever make love to Mommy?""""
Mmmm, been a while since I read it last, this story is just too deliciously naughty to not reread every so often!! Man I missed it :). It's begging for another chapter or two! Have to get his sister moved down and get in(to) the harem! Hehe! Mmm...they should bring over some of their shy girlfriends from school for daddy to break in, tehehe ;)!!
English
Bill & Cathy
I like some of the others that have read this great story.feel u need 2 right about bill&cathy .Love it keep them comming.JIM
Moreee
I love all your stories and this ones no exception! I think you need to continue with it tho. Cathy and bill whenthey started then if cathy ever comes to live with them
........I LOVED THE STORY...........
.......What a talent you are,...i enjoyed the story,..brought back fond memories....
Great Erotica
I read a great deal of incest stories and this one is one of the best. The love for both girls is great.
Concerns
Sir: Only Myanmar ("Burma") and the United States have no legislation to make System Internationale (metric) their basic standard. As for Gayle's discomfort with the metric system Canada, alas, continues to use whatever antiquated systems of measurement currently and widely used by our largest trading partner, as a concession to them.
In another of your stories, a young lady dreams of being attacked by Arabs. Granted dreams are dreams, but I find the reduction of Americans to stereotypically racist/xenophobic nationals. I've enjoyed reading your erotic tales, and find them engaging and entertaining, but I find myself a little perturbed by these kinds of national representations.
Be proud of your country, by all means; the U.S. has a great deal to be proud of, and is where it is on the backs of ethno-racial minorities.
Respectfully,
Hot!!
Well written! Left me wanting more from this storyline; are there additional chapters planned for this one?
once again
Once again a story that entices and builds. and sooo very sexy. Hot!
I am the 58th person to leave a comment, and here it is April 20, 2010 and ....
of all those only the anonymous (why won't he/she/it identify himself so we can see if he is the same single derogatory voter who votes against each story) shit who left a comment on 11/1/08 that panned the author, felt the need to go against the overwhelming majority that really enjoyed this work. I am reading Mr. Scouries works from A to the end and have now enjoyed 21 of his treasures. This was undoubtedly the best of his works that I have read thus far. Love and sex, sex and incest, unsaid but hinted at consequences of love and sex and incest, and the possibilities for more (at least in my fantasies) make this the best of the 21 I have read. Because I still have a long way to go to the end of Mr. Scouries submissions, I'm full of hope that this one, however good, however erotic, however full of sex and love, will fall well down my list of favorites by the time I finish. I'll let you know when I find a better one, but for now this story is the best!
Teasing is not nice!
Didn't your mom tell you that about teasing? Finish the story and let the four of them enjoy a wonderful life together.
Gayle
Great story. Hope to read what happened to Cathy? Thanks.
i liked the story
would like to see cathy be added into the action and they all have lots of fun living and fucking in montreal
GET THEM PREGNANT!!
Bill clearly needs to impregnate both Gayle and Izzy. I hope this will come in an additional chapter. Thanks for the great story so far!
Great
I liked your story. I'm wet from it very hard to do from stories on here
Nice story
I felt the consummation scene with Izzy was a little rushed, but otherwise up to your usual high standards. I look forward to the sequel when Cathy finally succumbs to Izzy's urgings to reconnect with her brother in Montreal. It will be quite a family, with Gayle, Izzy, and Cathy all taking turns at having his children. Monica, doubtless, will make an appearance, as well, bemoaning the fact that Bill is having sex with his "harem", then eventually joining in when she realizes why she actually left him was her fear of Gayle replacing her in Bill's affections.
Great story! This story deserves more chapters. Can you write more?
Write more, this story deserves more chapters.
Saucy, sexy and funny
PLEASE continue the story. I loved the characters and want to read about the whole family , including Cathy , living together.
fantastic,
love your writing and this is by far no exception. but please finish the story by bringing sweet Cathy back into the story.
Love it
Slowly but surely working my way through your stories. Keep writing.
Wondering
Izzy, lying at my side, asked, "Uncle Bill, when you were young, did you ever make love to Mommy?"
I picked up on this possiblity about half way through. Maybe the next part of this will tell the answer
One of the best stories. Makes me horny each time I read it.
Is there going to be a chapter 2 please.
Wow, wonderful!
The character buildup on the girls was amazing! I could picture them sooo wel in my head!
Well Done
This story is superbly written. The innuendos and teasing just build the story so well to the final 'climax' excuse the pun. Hope there are many more to come.
Two young loves
I really like your stories and the way you tell them and this one so far is near the top of the list but it's so hard to say. I really love the way the two girls get along and wiliness to share the father/uncle. So when is there going to be a chapter 2 when the sister gets involved and he has 3 women to satisfy but then they also satisfy each other.
AUTHOR, PLEASE READ.
I FEEL THAT THERE IS A GOOD COMEDIC PART OF THE STORY BETWEEN COUSINS. BUT THERE DEFINITELY IS A LACK OF CONSISTENCY WITH THE EROTISM PART OF THE STORY.
eroticism
I must admit i find your stories very easy to read and i love them - i loved this one and the one where the daughter seduces her Dad in Martinique..should you wish to contact me u can at eve.marie.mcdonald@gmail.com
Liked the erotica and the humor. I hope you write more of these stories!
More please!
This is the third time I've read this story and it get's better each time. Normally I prefer stories that are about a loving couple but this is the exception that proves the rule! The three main characters are all well written and the two girls are especially delightful in their relationship with each other. I realise that this is one of your older tomes but if you do ever wish to revisit this story now you are feeling better then I am sure I am not the only one who would enjoy a further chapter of their adventures.
I would never usually presume to suggest how a writer should develop their stories but I this case I would love to see his sister Cathy reunited with Bill and them becoming one big happy throng with maybe a little lesbian action between the two young girls and a baby with each woman to complete their unusual family unit. The chance to expand on the humour that has already been interwoven in their interactions would be almost limitless and could make another chapter (or two as there is so much scope here) even more delightful than the first.
Thanks for a great story!
We have a consensus, it seems.
From the comments I read, we, your faithful readers, are all asking for the same thing : Please finish this story.
Imho, with your easy style, not even dragging the story out, you've got at least a couple more chapters waiting to be written.
I understand writing cannot be hurried, but this story is sooo good. It just seems unfinished.
Only one problem...
Your stories are too short :D
""""The other room on my floor, the big room at the back," I answered. The house had three levels; the ground floor with kitchen, large entry hall, living room, dining room and bathroom; the second floor with three bedrooms, bathroom, a den and a TV room; and finally the top floor, with my large bedroom at the front, an extensive bathroom/spa and a large empty room at the back."""
@@@ damn!! I need his job! ...and his hottie niece ....and his daughter.. Hehe @@@
"""Gayle was spending an ever increasing time at the house and most days I'd return home to find her sitting in the second floor library, curled up on the sofa with a book in front of the fire."""
@@@ ...and he has a library, with a fireplace?! Bastard!! I want! @@@
""""Thanks Daddy," Gayle replied, blushing a deep red. "You know Daddy, before today, I had never seen one before I saw yours, not a real one anyway," she giggled. "Its weird just hanging there like that, it's much different than I thought,"
"Do you want to see him again?" I replied.
"Oh yes Daddy," she replied eagerly and then added, "Can I touch it?" as her fingers lightly moved across my thigh. "Oh, it's big Daddy, so big! They don't look so big in pictures," she murmured as her hand tightened around my now surging meat."""
@@@ Fuuuuuuck, I love that girl!! ;) Im gonna be fantasizing I'm daddy all evening,lol! @@@
""""Gayle," I finally started, my mind an emotional rollercoaster, "We can't do this... it's wrong... I'm sorry sweetie, it's just that... """"
@@@ daddy being a retard... Of course, lol. Girl knows exactly what she wants! @@@
""" "We're going to Aunt Cathy's tomorrow sweetie," I said, as my shaft bounced between our stomachs, "We can't do anything... "
"It's only for eight days Daddy, and then, when we come home... I'm not going to be a virgin in 2004 Daddy," she promised as she slipped to her knees, drawing me into her mouth as I stood helplessly erect, a slave to her ministering lips...
... We left that night for Burlington, as I moved our drive up one day to avoid what I knew would happen if we stayed one more night alone in my house, and arrived before ten to a joyous welcome from Cathy and Izzy. """
@@@ ugh, I hate it when the guy is written in like that! :( @@@
"""Hugging her as if in despair, I started to move my hands and fingers in a frenzy of sexual desire, but she stopped me, saying, "Daddy, I'm ready Daddy, please, put it in me, I'm gushing, pleasssse put him in me, fill your little daughter..""""
@@@ GaWd I love that girl!! @@@
""" I could feel the thin wall, straining to protect its valued canal, struggling to prevent my alien invader from penetrating its owners darkness, but holding her ass firmly I smashed through her defenses, shoving six inches deep in one thrust."""
@@@ O.M.G.!!! An author on this site that ACTUALLY knows where the hymen is!! The world is coming to an end!! @@@
""""It hurt Daddy, still hurts," she grunted. "But a good hurt. Don't take him out Daddy. How much more?" she gasped, and after lifting her head and seeing the amount left, groaned. "Jesus," she moaned as I stroked slowly within her, just letting her feel two thirds of my length. Minutes later I came, flooding my white sauce deep within her, but left my still hard penis within her, letting her continue to adjust to his size."""
@@@an early shooter, that blows! (Yah, cheesy pun!) that would suck, lol... At least he stayed hard though! @@@
"""We came together, both of us screaming like banshees, our orgasms momentarily maddening us, reducing us to rutting beasts. "Jesus," I cried as we fell apart panting, our juices smeared over my softening penis."""
@@@ if I had a buck for every simultaneous orgasm on this website... Lol;) @@@
"""Only you Daddy, only you can put your cock in me now, no one else, ever," she promised, """
@@@ Thats daddy's girl!! ;) @@@
"""As she came, sobbing as my both hands continued to massage her, I moved down between her legs and like Gayle before her lifted her hips up, lining her pussy's now sopping lips with my shaft."""
@@@ ...seriously though, where the hell are these girls that cum from you playing with their nipples?! I want a few of those! @@@
"""As I rammed again and again into her clenching tunnel, I"""
@@@ damn, again with the ramming! Yeesh! @@@
"""Uncle Bill, when you were young, did you ever make love to Mommy?""""
@@@was wondering when that was cumming!! Hehe@@@
Man, I love this story!! :)
I want more!
Awesome story had me begging for more...keep them cumming!
wow,
this story should have been expanded, what a great story, i love your writing style and would love to see a follow up on this story and many others.
Mmmm, been a while since I read it last, this story is just too deliciously naughty to not reread every so often!! Man I missed it :). It's begging for another chapter or two! Have to get his sister moved down and get in(to) the harem! Hehe! Mmm...they should bring over some of their shy girlfriends from school for daddy to break in, tehehe ;)!!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Gayle's Dad or
More submissions by scouries.