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I loved it
I enjoyed your story. Looking for more.
More than a little bit dopey around the edges
but a pretty good read. I can see more than a few loose ends here that could be the basis for various other chapters. Keep going, you are doing quite well.
Don't stop now
Scouries:
You have the makings of a great series with the start you made. Alright it is a great stand alone story, but old son, it begs for added chapters. This is not only hot, it's an easy read, and it looks like it was fun to write. Thank You. Ronnie W.
At least three more chapters
Great start for at least another round including the the third lady of the family.
GREAT!
You must continue the set. It was a great read and the imagery was nicely done, i could actually see the cousins as i read this story. congratulations and I hope to see more from this story line.
Terrific
Absolutely terrific.....you must continue on with this story. Anxiously awaiting more..Thanks
Good...
.... it has been a long time since I have read an incest story that I truly liked. Thank you for submitting this.
Always, E
Wow
Awesome story ! Thanks for this spellbinding tale of family erotica.
I'm torn between the desire to know the rest of the story, and the fantasies that are born with the ignorance of the missing details...
This story would be a great start for a saga...
This story is a perfect standalone...
I guess that's just the perfect mix of details vs mistery.
Thank you very much
Fabulous Story!
I would love to see another story with these characters included. Perhaps two stories. In any case fantastic story!
great story
great story. i have since clicked on your link and was pleasantly surprised to see so many other great stories too. thanks for the good work
Awesome
I love this story> Thought it was magnificent. Would love to see a sequel with Cathy moving in too...
Excellent Story
Really excellent story. Very well written and enough option available for a sequel. As with all your writings a real pleasure to read.
Excellent story
Jaime, I loved it. You really can write this genre well.
Well done
Great read and wish my stories had the flow that yours has.
Great Story!!!
I really thought that you did an awesome job with the story. But, it seems that you may have set us up for a sequel (at least I hope so). In any case, please keep writing.
Excellent!
Outstanding! It had all the elements needed to make a great story. I especially like the humor factor towards the end. Not many stories can end on a funny note but this one pulled it off. Truely there should be a sequel just as good if not better! I'll be looking forward to what new and interesting things that Izzy and Gayle can get into 'trouble' with :)
AWESOME, GREAT, FANTASTIC
Its hard to follow the others..
They said it all.
I Loved it, and hope you write more soon!!!!
Awesome Story
Truly great story. I really hope to see some more chapters to it.
Is "nice" an erotic word?
Gawd...Just how "sweet" was this story? You know...I just love really GREAT sex. But the thing I'm hung up on, now and in the far, far past, is...love. These wonderful people you created really LOVE one another. It makes the sex even hotter. And...I liked them...alot. Such a NICE story. Yeah...it is erotic, isn't it...
Oh dear...
... only 5 for that!
Yes, there's gotta be more!!
Wonderful Story
One of the best erotic stories I have read. Daddy-daughter is of course one of my favorite kinky fantasies.
Really good
This was really good. I hope you continue this with a sequel. The situation between the father and his sister was interesting. You touched on it a bit but I wonder how the daughter and niece will react to it or if they even know about it.
Where is CH. 2
Very good ! Hope ch 2 is coming very soon. will be looking for it Keep up the good work.
What can I say?
This was really good. I enjoy really great sex but the thing that I look for is LOVE, real warm and tender LOVE. The wonderful characters you have created seem to, very much LOVE each another. It makes the incestuous sex hotter and more acceptable. You need to continue this with a sequel with Cathy moving in too. Gayle and Izzy would accept it, I think, with Izzy already laying the ground work by asking , "Uncle Bill, when you were young, did you ever make love to Mommy?" Bill appears to have had a 'loving' week with Cathy in the fall of 1983 just before she left home for Yale and they were all stunned when she came home the next May, six months pregnant! Clearly, Bill could be Izzy's father - what a wonderful idea! But I think that the author already knows this!
A continuation please. You are getting to be my favourite writer!
Where is part 2?
Ok, so where is the part where we find out that Bill is Izzy's father. It is an awsome story... I want to read more please post more.... SypberPet.......
Fantasy
It was beautiful. What guy wouldn't want 2 women to only want to have sex with him. That story was sexy, I just wish the story explained a little more in detail the sex and blowjobs
Best yet.
Definitely more than a 5. Is there going to be a follow up on this story?
Best Yet
I loved the story. It needs to have several more chapters to follow the fulfulling of these lives.
I REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY
YOU ARE VERY GOOD YOU SHOULD WRITE A BOOK ABOUT THESE CHARACTERS
Has to be more!
Great story, please let there be more chapters.
I loved this one
Izzy was superbly drawn up character... and the hints for what they planned were just right... and the competition between them was sooo sweet.. another story deserving a sequel...
Blissful reading
Hi, thankyou so much, for this wonderfully erotic story.
Which I enjoyed tremendously. Maybe one day we all may find a sequel to it.
WE MUST KNOW
I loved the story. very well written. PLEASE tell about Izzy's mom and the week ...
Nice
I'm actually living in VT now, so this was a great story to read. Been to Montreal many times too. We work with some McGill students at work in Burlington as well. I'm a big fan of your daughter-daddy stories. My current gf and I get off on that kind of talk. Keep up the great work!
Great story:)
Thanks Jim for recomending it to me:) I liked it a lot:) Jona
What happens next or before
One of the best stories I have read but you cannot leave us in suspense? When did you and your sister enjoy the pleasures and when will we see more than three in a bed
Awesome!
I have never commented on any of the stories here in Literotica but I have no choice when it comes to this one. This story is a gem! Brilliant! You've created interesting characters, great storyline, good dialogue. I would love to read a sequel - or a prequel. Please give us more!
How Exquisite was that!!!!
Damn, to have the attention of the two girls in that story!!! I definitely need to read the rest of your submissions...immediately!!!
MORE PLEASE!!!!
Loved the story. Please write another chapter, Can't wait for it. Keep it as hot as this one.
Thanks,
Mike
Absolutely perfect!
I never ever felt the urge to comment on any story I read, but I cannot leave this one uncommented! It's great, it's marvelous, it's just perfect! Please carry it on, especially since the ending easily allows a sequel ;)
bill and cathy
need to know more about those the and we need a story about just gayle and izzy. looking forward to more of your work.
More Please
I enjoyed this story.I hope you write another chapter.
very hot
hot tale, really enjoyed the storyline, the girls will have to take turns, lucky man
more
Awesome just bloody awesome, like to see more chptrs for this great father daughter(s) story
Needs an update.
How about all four of them getting together. I have a suspicion that Izzy and Gayle are both his girls anyway. It seems that Monica is glad that Gayle is not around and Kathy still has feelings for Bill too. Why not let it all out and let them enjoy their long, overdue love for each other. Use your appreciation of Gayle and ask her to help you to convey her emotions so you can express the deep desires and concern she must have for her obvious loves. jim
AMAZING
I think that I am only going to read your stories for a long time. You have the knack of mesmerizing a reader, making them think your stories are true and real.You Sir, are the best.
Really nice!
I want more! More! More! This story can go on and on and on!
Kathy's Turn
Enjoyed it very much, is their another chapter coming involving Isabel's Mom Kathy? She seems to be alone now. John
I want more
I love it. If you have not continued it please do I want to know if Cathy ever comes!
Perfect? Mesmerising?
Not at all, scours. Just typical fantasy. Geez. When did you start writing, 12 years old? Have you even tried to improve since then?
Bland style and complete lack of originality. Okay, so its an older work. Couldn't tell from reading your more recent stuff. Lit's rules says no underage characters. How about no underaged writers? Damn.
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