...but I liked it. Barb's head was so far up her ass in denial, that it's hard to imagine she would become this totally other person over the course of a few months, therapy or not. I mean, she doesn't seem even close to the same person. And, Steve has everything about him that suggests a guy who would not go back on his principals, even with a threat to his job at stake-hard to believe he didn't bail on the counselling sooner, even if he did go (which seems unlikely). Further, nothing was ever really described about how Barb got involved with the asshole at work-or why. A lot of talking around issues like low self esteem and insecurity and immaturity, etc., but come on. She didn't have a wake up call after the Xmas party? At first, it seems like she did. The absence of Steve and the miscarriage maybe explains the second fall from grace with Rafe, but the whole thing seems pretty weird (2 handjobs, over the pants, while sneaking around with this guy for a couple/three months?). I could go on forever. Nevertheless, i liked the writing, and thought the actual sex scene at the end was actually pretty hot. The Grandma was great, and I liked the process Steve went through-maybe the one thing that seemed credible.
Seems like the author understands the psyche of a man who has been betrayed, but sort of interweaves charicatures and fantasies for the other characters. But, I couldn't help but read it more than once; maybe to try and wrap my head around it as much as anything else.
I'm also a sucker for reconciliation stories. People screw up (and sometimes screw around) in this world. Hate the sin, not the sinner is a wise saying imho. But then again, so is trust, but verify. I didn't like "Lyin' Eyes" nearly as much-the wife there was so much more vile, and the husband was, if not a wimp (I don't think those who take a stand, but ultimately forgive the one they love, when that one is truly repentent and take actual steps to solve the problem, are wimps-those who put up with cheating they don't want and just 'deal with it' are), then incomprehensibly and unreasonably willing to put up with what I can only describe as evil behavior. But, I'll read the other stories, cause I'm very curious about this writer's stuff.
I gave this a head-scratching 4 stars.
by
Anonymous10/13/11
Stupid wimp husband.
Definitely NOT a good author. Always same theme.
by
Anonymous10/29/11
I can't imagine any..
real MAN taking her back. Makes me dislike a character (Steve) I liked in the beginning.
by
Anonymous11/05/11
Entertainment
This story is way, way, way to long for this forum! If I wish to read a book I can go to the Library. Please don't quit your day job.
but far too long and a bit repetitive. I found myself skipping towards the end and didn't get much from the last two pages.
Shame. This writer has all the talent needed.
I thought this was an excellent story. Your writing style is very good and your character development skills are outstanding. Take for instance the character Lydia, the Grandmother. I felt like she was an actual person and I could see her in my mind's eye. Her looks, her personality, everything about her was spelled out so well that very little imagination was needed to summon up a mental image of her and to know her like an old friend. This is a rare talent indeed.
It was fascinating to watch the transformation of Barbara from the childish, insensitive person she was to the loving wife she became at the end. It was also impossible to not be empathetic with the long suffering Steve and the depth of love and forgiveness he displayed. It was all too realistic to see that this story describes a great many actual relationships. They take hard work, openess, and communication to survive. They are all too fragile, and yet even at the breaking point they can be saved if both parties are willing to do the required work to make it happen. Some have commented that the story was too long. I, for one, beg to differ. It took time and space to let this story play out and get to the strong emotions and difficulties at the heart of this relationship, as well as the complexities of the personalities of this couple.
Aside from some minor grammatical errors this was a near perfect story. It was heartwarming, erotic, and romantic. I was very impressed and you may rest assured longhorn that you are now in my list of favorite authors. A solid four stars.
by
Anonymous01/05/12
not your best
problems with him intentionally getting std, aids and HIV. problems with the miscarriage - was it his, was it an abortion, where is the medical proof.
I saw it was 18 pages long and decided I wasn't going to read a story that long...but,
I read some more and decided it would be worth putting into my favorite stories and coming back to it occasionally, so I did. But then I continued to read, I couldn't stop until I found it was early morning and I had to get some sleep, so I finally went to bed. I thought about the story over night and couldn't wait to get back to it the next day. Once I started reading where I had left off the previous day, I couldn't stop again. I hung on every word. Like myself, I can only think that someone who can write so clearly of the pain involved in a situation like that, has probably gone through it himself. I applaud your every word in this story. You did a great job! Thank you.
nakdsub. Oh, BTW...5* from me. I wish I could give it more.
What I missed a little was some background info on Barbara, especially in the beginning she has absolutely no personality even less any redeeming qualities, later it would have been interesting to learn a bit more about her and Kims upbringing and how it all went down the drain with Kimberly (I mean she is barely out of high-school and is already on hard drugs and into hardcore porn).
Considering that Barbara did not really have sex with anyone I think the reconcilliation and the road there was resonable.
What I really liked wath the Character of Lydia and how we are somehow deluding ourselves into believing that older people dont know what sex is. Its just ridiculus. I dont think even the most hardcore stuff one can find today was done since the dawn of the human race, I mean it doesnt take a genius to figure out that you can push a cock into an ass or that more than two people can have sex together.
Still one of my favorites. I think this one offers hope to couples who experience what they think is insurmountable despair. The way Barbara & her sister are SO disturbed, it's hard to believe that they BOTH didn't suffer some sort of severe trauma as children. Still, I loved reading a tale where the couple could seek help & work through their issues. Nicely done.
It kept me up all night reading the story, and it was well worth the loss of sleep.
Thanks so very much for the story...
by
Anonymous06/17/12
Its Possible
Really solid story line...high quality writting. Could have used a little more background on the wife & sister..seems like they have some real problems...I kept expecting to read about sexual abuse by the father. The emotional infidelity with Porter and Barbara is something I am experiencing ...so there is some realtiy to the story. Great job...thanks for the read.
What a long drawn out story. It was good up to about page10 where Steve turned into a wimp. If he was as good as he thought he was he would have told his bosses to go fuck themselves when they insisted about the counseling sessions. At that point I knew he was going to wimp out and end up taking her back. This story had a fairly good plot but was way too long to hold my interest. By page 12 I was just skimming through it. Shorten them up dude.
How could a "Longhorn_07" really use the term "butt cheeks"?
Thought that was reserved for across the Atlantic.
Use of "curling lips" is only good for once in a career, along with "dripping sarcasm".
Agree that you incorporated many good ideas and eroticism. Did a great job of making wifey into a completely clueless, self-absorbed bitch.
by
Anonymous10/08/12
I'm torn
I really HATED the ending. The wimp husband eventually worn down by psychiatrists, his grandmother in law and his company made this one not really enjoyable. Yet the quality of writing is really good. As I said, I don't know whether to vote 5 or 1 stars. I hate for the cheating wife to eventually get her way, and now with child this wimp will never leave her (if it is even his). Dammit Longhorn, you are not making this easy, you are a great writer, but grow some balls.
As with all your tale's it was a good read. But I can't understand why all the money was wasted on counseling. The old women should have called a tow truck to get their heads pulled out of their assholes so they could listen to her.
by
Anonymous10/11/12
What
A wimp fag ending. U were a 5 until then. Now a -1
by
Anonymous10/15/12
Can you see my comment?
Hello LH.
The length, and the struggle for so long. That's what makes your story worth reading. Your resolutions - whether the wife leaves a husband, or a husband leaves his wife - are never 'let's get this over with' attitude that some authors so seem to prefer - leaving their stories but naught a single a page!
Your stories leave an impact, not because of great ideas, but simply because the resolutions is realistic and long. The way it should be.
One of the better stories here on Lito.
Strength to you.
- HHL
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Anonymous12/10/12
she is a slut
sorry no wife goes that far and says nothing happened. She is a compulsive liar and worthless kick her out do not take them back.
It is a rare occurrence when something truly worthy of praise and admiration exists on a free basis. I've found myself at the unique pleasure of having read a story that not only was satisfying, but truly thought provoking and inspirational.
First, all the naysayers likely fall into two categories: those who could not finish the story, or those who fail to see the big picture. Either way, negative responses like that are ultimately an affirmation of the author's writing talent. If these characters weren't given a powerful realism, there would not be an emotional response to their actions.
As for the story itself. I am pleased I found such a delightful read on this website. The character development was so incredibly powerful, it often felt as if Steve and Barbara were living, breathing people, and we were the "flies on the wall" to just observe. There is such an impact where a reader can begin by hating (in every sense of the word, detesting, wishing bad or harmful things upon) a character, only to watch them grow, evolve and transform into something better, much like the metamorphosis of a butterfly. Likewise, when a character seems righteously justified, we root for him to have his vengeance and satisfaction.
But the author has gone above and beyond simple emotional responses. I started by absolutely despising Barbara, then her parents. I felt Steve was a little over the top when he could have simply sought divorce. But as the story progressed, Barbara showed redeemable qualities (I thought impossible at first), Steve became a much more complex and deep character, and I admit, I felt dismayed when he cheated, but the writing made it feel so real - like it was just a human natured response to his developing inner turmoil.
Anyway, LH did such a fantastic job creating such realistic and emotional characters. This truly is a tale worthy of praise.
Rex
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Anonymous12/21/12
Did Ohio and Longhorn write this together over a romantic weekend where their wives pulled trains for them? 18 pages of idiotic dog shit. Same simpering wimp men. Dear god.
One of the best written on this site. I thought for sure there was no way reconciliation was possible and I was hoping he would totally burn the bitch. And yet, at the end I was applauding and let out a whoop! It takes great writing to be able to effectively travel down that road and cause an evolution of emotions in the reader. Amazing!
Loved this line the best:
"Woman," he remarked, "overreacting or not, the next time you take another man's side against me like you did tonight…the next time you laugh when another man insults me and demeans me…the next time you play up to some other man like he means everything in the world to you and I mean nothing…that's the day I assume this marriage is over and I will divorce your ass before you can whistle Dixie. Believe it, Barbara! It will happen."
In life we all go down roads we wish we avoided or missed. Some of us royally screwup. We usually ask our God to forgive us and move on. Some learn their lesson others don't. This story touches on that subject with clarity and emotion. I was fortunate to have all grandparents and a great grandpa Lydia was the sentimental fool and hero of this story and I miss her already. This was a happy ending feel good story, that illustrated the vulnerability of a human and human relationship in a marriage. So often we find ourselves being disrespected or disrespectful. You usually feel it heavily when disrespected but may or may not realize when being disrespectful. This story blew up the anatomy of this very point giving a clear view to the reader of what this very poignant point is all about. Thank you author!
A well defined story good plot but it felt to easy the main character is to easy to push around all the fake feminist therapy, where was his support group? none at all!
The therapist was there for her pushing for her only her nothing best for the man,he should have walk/run away from the evil in these others souls nony was a iron-rod in nurf stuff, sorry couldn't by her remorse it was all to lets just go back to the easy way she wants it to be, and her character and her family had no empathy for him at all it just seemed fake. It is just a to easy story easy in , easy out no way she wont destroy him again that's what i got from her character.
stories but Rhomanov was right, you only get a three for this one. That U turn was unbelievably fast. You nearly lost me, I thought I must have somehow got into another story, or at least missed a page.
Having a name like "longhorn" compelled the author to write something really really really really really reallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyre allyreallyreallyreallyreally
long (18 really's for 18 long pages). I guess it would have been nice if he had chosen a name like "shorthorn" so the story would be short instead of long.
It's long, Its boring, it's full of gloating in the "I am a wimp" so sue me bullshit.
Barbra and Steve had a fairy godmother: Barbra's grandmother. Barbra was broken and Steve had had enough. He wanted a quick divorce! Lydia put so many roadblocks in his way, she had time to get Barbra fixed! Steve never had a chance. Lydia, by hook and crook, got the marriage back together, better than their first four years. Now, they both fight to understand and take care of each other 24 hours every day. No storybook but a solid, based on trust, Marriage!! This story is very special because they had someone who loved them very much!! This author is Great!
by
Anonymous05/30/13
Why?
Why take her back...turned a good story into more wimp shit. Whatever...
English
Far fetched...
...but I liked it. Barb's head was so far up her ass in denial, that it's hard to imagine she would become this totally other person over the course of a few months, therapy or not. I mean, she doesn't seem even close to the same person. And, Steve has everything about him that suggests a guy who would not go back on his principals, even with a threat to his job at stake-hard to believe he didn't bail on the counselling sooner, even if he did go (which seems unlikely). Further, nothing was ever really described about how Barb got involved with the asshole at work-or why. A lot of talking around issues like low self esteem and insecurity and immaturity, etc., but come on. She didn't have a wake up call after the Xmas party? At first, it seems like she did. The absence of Steve and the miscarriage maybe explains the second fall from grace with Rafe, but the whole thing seems pretty weird (2 handjobs, over the pants, while sneaking around with this guy for a couple/three months?). I could go on forever. Nevertheless, i liked the writing, and thought the actual sex scene at the end was actually pretty hot. The Grandma was great, and I liked the process Steve went through-maybe the one thing that seemed credible.
Seems like the author understands the psyche of a man who has been betrayed, but sort of interweaves charicatures and fantasies for the other characters. But, I couldn't help but read it more than once; maybe to try and wrap my head around it as much as anything else.
I'm also a sucker for reconciliation stories. People screw up (and sometimes screw around) in this world. Hate the sin, not the sinner is a wise saying imho. But then again, so is trust, but verify. I didn't like "Lyin' Eyes" nearly as much-the wife there was so much more vile, and the husband was, if not a wimp (I don't think those who take a stand, but ultimately forgive the one they love, when that one is truly repentent and take actual steps to solve the problem, are wimps-those who put up with cheating they don't want and just 'deal with it' are), then incomprehensibly and unreasonably willing to put up with what I can only describe as evil behavior. But, I'll read the other stories, cause I'm very curious about this writer's stuff.
I gave this a head-scratching 4 stars.
Stupid wimp husband.
Definitely NOT a good author. Always same theme.
I can't imagine any..
real MAN taking her back. Makes me dislike a character (Steve) I liked in the beginning.
Entertainment
This story is way, way, way to long for this forum! If I wish to read a book I can go to the Library. Please don't quit your day job.
Very well written
but far too long and a bit repetitive. I found myself skipping towards the end and didn't get much from the last two pages.
Shame. This writer has all the talent needed.
Loved it!
I thought this was an excellent story. Your writing style is very good and your character development skills are outstanding. Take for instance the character Lydia, the Grandmother. I felt like she was an actual person and I could see her in my mind's eye. Her looks, her personality, everything about her was spelled out so well that very little imagination was needed to summon up a mental image of her and to know her like an old friend. This is a rare talent indeed.
It was fascinating to watch the transformation of Barbara from the childish, insensitive person she was to the loving wife she became at the end. It was also impossible to not be empathetic with the long suffering Steve and the depth of love and forgiveness he displayed. It was all too realistic to see that this story describes a great many actual relationships. They take hard work, openess, and communication to survive. They are all too fragile, and yet even at the breaking point they can be saved if both parties are willing to do the required work to make it happen. Some have commented that the story was too long. I, for one, beg to differ. It took time and space to let this story play out and get to the strong emotions and difficulties at the heart of this relationship, as well as the complexities of the personalities of this couple.
Aside from some minor grammatical errors this was a near perfect story. It was heartwarming, erotic, and romantic. I was very impressed and you may rest assured longhorn that you are now in my list of favorite authors. A solid four stars.
not your best
problems with him intentionally getting std, aids and HIV. problems with the miscarriage - was it his, was it an abortion, where is the medical proof.
Well, you got me hooked early...then,
I saw it was 18 pages long and decided I wasn't going to read a story that long...but,
I read some more and decided it would be worth putting into my favorite stories and coming back to it occasionally, so I did. But then I continued to read, I couldn't stop until I found it was early morning and I had to get some sleep, so I finally went to bed. I thought about the story over night and couldn't wait to get back to it the next day. Once I started reading where I had left off the previous day, I couldn't stop again. I hung on every word. Like myself, I can only think that someone who can write so clearly of the pain involved in a situation like that, has probably gone through it himself. I applaud your every word in this story. You did a great job! Thank you.
nakdsub. Oh, BTW...5* from me. I wish I could give it more.
robinhod said it well for me: too repetitive and lack editing. Events and thoughts
got lost over the extended telling. Don't understand why I gave it a 5 the first time. I give it a 3 now.
I gave it 5 stars ...
...good story but it could have used more sex.
An inspiration
I read your whole story - it was an inspiration to me in my own mariage. Tank you.
Bet it isnt his kid!
Maybe he should drink directly from the source and skip the creampies
I'll bet
he gets RePhilled from both ends, whether it be slurping creampies or smoking cock, blatant buggery or anal invasion
these are some fucked up people
and hubby is as fucked up as they are. good story - hard to imagine a group of assholes as bad as you created and they all mesh too.
Overall a very good Story.
What I missed a little was some background info on Barbara, especially in the beginning she has absolutely no personality even less any redeeming qualities, later it would have been interesting to learn a bit more about her and Kims upbringing and how it all went down the drain with Kimberly (I mean she is barely out of high-school and is already on hard drugs and into hardcore porn).
Considering that Barbara did not really have sex with anyone I think the reconcilliation and the road there was resonable.
What I really liked wath the Character of Lydia and how we are somehow deluding ourselves into believing that older people dont know what sex is. Its just ridiculus. I dont think even the most hardcore stuff one can find today was done since the dawn of the human race, I mean it doesnt take a genius to figure out that you can push a cock into an ass or that more than two people can have sex together.
Came Back & Re-Read This One
Still one of my favorites. I think this one offers hope to couples who experience what they think is insurmountable despair. The way Barbara & her sister are SO disturbed, it's hard to believe that they BOTH didn't suffer some sort of severe trauma as children. Still, I loved reading a tale where the couple could seek help & work through their issues. Nicely done.
A well built an executed storyline
A good story with professional quality writing.
It kept me up all night reading the story, and it was well worth the loss of sleep.
Thanks so very much for the story...
Its Possible
Really solid story line...high quality writting. Could have used a little more background on the wife & sister..seems like they have some real problems...I kept expecting to read about sexual abuse by the father. The emotional infidelity with Porter and Barbara is something I am experiencing ...so there is some realtiy to the story. Great job...thanks for the read.
Ye gads
What a long drawn out story. It was good up to about page10 where Steve turned into a wimp. If he was as good as he thought he was he would have told his bosses to go fuck themselves when they insisted about the counseling sessions. At that point I knew he was going to wimp out and end up taking her back. This story had a fairly good plot but was way too long to hold my interest. By page 12 I was just skimming through it. Shorten them up dude.
The story was too long. I also lost interest after page 8 or 9, and after that just skimmed through the whole story.
Really great story....
Longhorn: I'm amazed and impressed at the effort you put into this story and by the well expressed ideas and themes. Thanks.
How could a "Longhorn_07" really use the term "butt cheeks"?
Thought that was reserved for across the Atlantic.
Use of "curling lips" is only good for once in a career, along with "dripping sarcasm".
Agree that you incorporated many good ideas and eroticism. Did a great job of making wifey into a completely clueless, self-absorbed bitch.
I'm torn
I really HATED the ending. The wimp husband eventually worn down by psychiatrists, his grandmother in law and his company made this one not really enjoyable. Yet the quality of writing is really good. As I said, I don't know whether to vote 5 or 1 stars. I hate for the cheating wife to eventually get her way, and now with child this wimp will never leave her (if it is even his). Dammit Longhorn, you are not making this easy, you are a great writer, but grow some balls.
NONY
As with all your tale's it was a good read. But I can't understand why all the money was wasted on counseling. The old women should have called a tow truck to get their heads pulled out of their assholes so they could listen to her.
What
A wimp fag ending. U were a 5 until then. Now a -1
Can you see my comment?
Hello LH.
The length, and the struggle for so long. That's what makes your story worth reading. Your resolutions - whether the wife leaves a husband, or a husband leaves his wife - are never 'let's get this over with' attitude that some authors so seem to prefer - leaving their stories but naught a single a page!
Your stories leave an impact, not because of great ideas, but simply because the resolutions is realistic and long. The way it should be.
One of the better stories here on Lito.
Strength to you.
- HHL
she is a slut
sorry no wife goes that far and says nothing happened. She is a compulsive liar and worthless kick her out do not take them back.
Worthy of Praise
It is a rare occurrence when something truly worthy of praise and admiration exists on a free basis. I've found myself at the unique pleasure of having read a story that not only was satisfying, but truly thought provoking and inspirational.
First, all the naysayers likely fall into two categories: those who could not finish the story, or those who fail to see the big picture. Either way, negative responses like that are ultimately an affirmation of the author's writing talent. If these characters weren't given a powerful realism, there would not be an emotional response to their actions.
As for the story itself. I am pleased I found such a delightful read on this website. The character development was so incredibly powerful, it often felt as if Steve and Barbara were living, breathing people, and we were the "flies on the wall" to just observe. There is such an impact where a reader can begin by hating (in every sense of the word, detesting, wishing bad or harmful things upon) a character, only to watch them grow, evolve and transform into something better, much like the metamorphosis of a butterfly. Likewise, when a character seems righteously justified, we root for him to have his vengeance and satisfaction.
But the author has gone above and beyond simple emotional responses. I started by absolutely despising Barbara, then her parents. I felt Steve was a little over the top when he could have simply sought divorce. But as the story progressed, Barbara showed redeemable qualities (I thought impossible at first), Steve became a much more complex and deep character, and I admit, I felt dismayed when he cheated, but the writing made it feel so real - like it was just a human natured response to his developing inner turmoil.
Anyway, LH did such a fantastic job creating such realistic and emotional characters. This truly is a tale worthy of praise.
Rex
Did Ohio and Longhorn write this together over a romantic weekend where their wives pulled trains for them? 18 pages of idiotic dog shit. Same simpering wimp men. Dear god.
Loved it!
One of the best written on this site. I thought for sure there was no way reconciliation was possible and I was hoping he would totally burn the bitch. And yet, at the end I was applauding and let out a whoop! It takes great writing to be able to effectively travel down that road and cause an evolution of emotions in the reader. Amazing!
Loved this line the best:
"Woman," he remarked, "overreacting or not, the next time you take another man's side against me like you did tonight…the next time you laugh when another man insults me and demeans me…the next time you play up to some other man like he means everything in the world to you and I mean nothing…that's the day I assume this marriage is over and I will divorce your ass before you can whistle Dixie. Believe it, Barbara! It will happen."
Amen! I am a huge fan.
ever notice
that the self appointed critics all have the same name, it the story is too long stop reading it and close your pie hole
Long read, but...
A long read, but well worth the journey. Good story.
good story
awesome tale, thanks for writing and sharing.
Great!
I really like a happy ending. I liked the people. That speaks well of your story telling.
reads like a motherfuckin fairytale...loved it. cant believe hdk is ur mentor and not the other way around! keep on writing u bastard.
Fantastic
Not everyone likes happy endings, but this one was perfect for me. Excellent plot and the characters were very believable!!! Excellent Job mate!!!
Great Story
In life we all go down roads we wish we avoided or missed. Some of us royally screwup. We usually ask our God to forgive us and move on. Some learn their lesson others don't. This story touches on that subject with clarity and emotion. I was fortunate to have all grandparents and a great grandpa Lydia was the sentimental fool and hero of this story and I miss her already. This was a happy ending feel good story, that illustrated the vulnerability of a human and human relationship in a marriage. So often we find ourselves being disrespected or disrespectful. You usually feel it heavily when disrespected but may or may not realize when being disrespectful. This story blew up the anatomy of this very point giving a clear view to the reader of what this very poignant point is all about. Thank you author!
Good Style but the Plot was a Bust
Enjoyed it up till page 13. Sorry, but the 180 in the plot line was a serious let down.
To easy
A well defined story good plot but it felt to easy the main character is to easy to push around all the fake feminist therapy, where was his support group? none at all!
The therapist was there for her pushing for her only her nothing best for the man,he should have walk/run away from the evil in these others souls nony was a iron-rod in nurf stuff, sorry couldn't by her remorse it was all to lets just go back to the easy way she wants it to be, and her character and her family had no empathy for him at all it just seemed fake. It is just a to easy story easy in , easy out no way she wont destroy him again that's what i got from her character.
Very good
Very good! Thank you for sharing!
I have enjoyed all your other
stories but Rhomanov was right, you only get a three for this one. That U turn was unbelievably fast. You nearly lost me, I thought I must have somehow got into another story, or at least missed a page.
I wonder what color eyes Raphs kids are going to have
Do you think they will be twins
Wimp
He should be using the butt plug. It would make it easier to take the butt fucking she just gave him.
solotoro
Has it right.
18 pages of wimp cuckie garbage from a good writer.
A masterclass in boredom.
Having a name like "longhorn" compelled the author to write something really really really really really reallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyre allyreallyreallyreallyreally
long (18 really's for 18 long pages). I guess it would have been nice if he had chosen a name like "shorthorn" so the story would be short instead of long.
It's long, Its boring, it's full of gloating in the "I am a wimp" so sue me bullshit.
Lydia's strength of belief!!
Barbra and Steve had a fairy godmother: Barbra's grandmother. Barbra was broken and Steve had had enough. He wanted a quick divorce! Lydia put so many roadblocks in his way, she had time to get Barbra fixed! Steve never had a chance. Lydia, by hook and crook, got the marriage back together, better than their first four years. Now, they both fight to understand and take care of each other 24 hours every day. No storybook but a solid, based on trust, Marriage!! This story is very special because they had someone who loved them very much!! This author is Great!
Why?
Why take her back...turned a good story into more wimp shit. Whatever...
Nony is awesome.
Long winded garbage
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