Requital

Amazing story

Across the barriers of geography, I have to tell, this story of coming back, is universal. Throwing something is easy, picking it up and making it useful is what life is all about.
Learnt something on the way.
Kudos!

18 pages of well written cuckie.

Two things

Trust IS part of forgiving; if you do not trust the other person how can you believe their apology ?

The moment the management told me that I needed to go to counseling with the cheating slut to get a promotion I would have started looking for another job.

Nothing would be worth staying with a cheater.

When hubby would rather die from AIDS than get back with the wife no way could a reconciliation every happen never mind putting up with the bullshit psycobabble.

Excellent indepth psychological story

A long story, but worth the reading. Excellent character development and good resolution to the conflict.

Need to have a 10 star rating

Fuck all these morons who trashed the story. THE THE BEST AND MOST WELL WRITTEN story I've ever read on Literotica. Kudos to Longhorn

Why didn't he stick her in a chastity belt and sue the shit out of Rafe for starters?

Once a cheat always a cheat.

Why on earth would he take her back....I mean WTF longhorn.

kingdong2

You can't unring a bell. He should have kicked her to the curb.

mixed feelings

as one that has been through the same thing, I have mixed feelings whether he should have kicked her out or not. I didn't and have been married for 41 years. My wife cheated 35 years ago. I felt the same way, like my world had totally collapsed and was near suicidal. We worked things out, love came back, but after 35 years the trust has not fully returned. Every time I feel close to fully trusting her, my nightmares of catching her come back and I go through days of sleepless nights. Suicide at the time was the only other option I could see. I believe I made the right choice.

Great Read

People don't normally change very much. However, that does not mean that they can't. Your story pointed out that open lines of communication are important in a marriage and I really enjoyed the conclusion of this story.
Life is not always a bed or roses, but neither is is always a bed of thorns and you expressed that thought very well. I liked that you were able to express the emotions of both spouses as they worked their way through their problems. Bravo!

Great writer/author amazing story

Anatomy of immature love bumps and conflicts catastrophic confrontation, intervention and conflict resolution, reunification, love and growth. Our main characters lived through hell and back and finally through the intervention of a wise and lovely elderly lady love prevailed with reconciliation and growth to maturity. This writer is way better than magnificent in grasping at nuances of human interaction and character development. This story is enjoyable after tithe fourth read. This author is totally enjoyable in this presentation and the characters are very human. The emotion is severe and real and it doesn't get much better than this.

one of the best

this is one of the best stories i have ever read. as someone who has been there (only with the roles reversed) i have truly appreciated and understood this story.

You should have just killed the fucker off with AIDS or something and ended the story there, instead of this taking the wifey back and falling back in love shit that you pulled.

I love this story

It is my recall... there is a ring of truth to this... seems like a husband did see his wife in pictures of the sociality section... with another man...

after reading eight pages of this crap...

I decided that watching dry paint was a better use of my time

sos

same old story but with different characters dealing with different situations and different solutions. I have read liar, requital and your most recent work fool me once. I respect your work because you are expressive, good at developing strong and believable characters. Your stories are devoid of the usual tired old cuckold crap. I plan on finishing all of your works and want to thank you for taking up so much of my time to enjoy your work. Keep writing. You are appreciated by this fan of your work. Don l

Another Fucked Up Cuck Story

Next time put a gun in mouth and pull the trigger. More humane than sticking him with the slut for life. Your character is too stupid to cut his loss when has the chance to rid himself of cheating slut. But this is your story and maybe your life.

The story dragged on way to long

This story dragged on and on. I found the first few pages interesting but early into the story I knew how it would end. Other than Steve fucking the little sister ( I thought he would fuck Elaine) I knew they would get back together and I even predicted they would have a baby. Reading this story to the end was like watching a week of Young and the Restless. It just goes on and on with out any real end in sight, no strong plot, weak writing( Loose the counseling part not interesting at all.) and weak characters. Long and boring sums it up best. .

Not what I expected... but worth it...

I once demonstrated how to get a stuck egg out of a carton by turning it upside down...
Seemed reasonable - if only i'd thought to take the rest of the eggs out first...

I'm not stupid but even smart people do stupid things when they don't actively think of the consequences...

This story was SO believable... I liked it... I was worried at first it would be a revenge story where he destroys all guilty parties (which while ok as a story wasn't what I wanted to read) or a story where she effectively became his chattel in an effort to make amends...

People being people with all of their faults though... well worth the time to read..

Word Processor Diahrrea

That was a long, eighteen-page waste-of-time to tell us the guy stayed a cuck/wimp pussy. Considering I just did the same in one line.

pretty good story

He didn't become a cuck or wimp pussy. A cuck would have gone and helped the guy to fuck his wife by getting him hard for her. A wimp pussy would allow her to sleep with others and look the other way. He fought for a divorce but her lawyer was fighting him, and he found out she only gave the guy a rub job and no actuall sex. So I don't understand how you think he was a cuck or wimp pussy. He got even with her by fucking her sister, and then they came to their senses with help from their councler and her grandmother. This was a really good story, and I hope you don't let the people who don't know what they are talking about discourage you from writing more.

good story

5 starrs

Mind boggling / Mind bending

I was completely immersed for many hours; going back & forth, thinking the scenarios through. The turmoil made me rethink my own logic, I know that I would respond differently, than how I would have before reading it. I still can't say how it would turn out if I were in Steve's shoes.

((To the asshat that said they read it in 1 hour; BS - you read the "words", not the "story"; you have to let it get inside your head, utilize your imagination, feel the emotions. You can Speed-Read a Technical Manual or Encyclopedia because it's just data; but not a Erotic Suspense / Thriller; your Brain, Heat & Soul were disengaged.))

This is actually the first Reconciliation story that I've seen; every other Cheaters story has been blood & guts. I'm a Romantic at heart and didn't see how Reconciliation could be possible. I didn't see any Romance from Barbara until the very end.

((Note; I absolutely abhor Cheaters / Cheating , this should NOT be in a Loving Wives category (they need to create a Cheating Partners category), of course LW should instead be Loving Partners.))

The backbone to Barbara's and Kim's faults was their overprotective parents; who'd kept them from developing into real, strong women. They were both still immature little girls and were not equipped to deal with reality. It took a loving person to see the issues and to say "something's wrong & needs to be addressed). Sex as we all know can / should be a good thing; but they were misguided and brought up that it was bad, Barb believed and it caused problems because she wasn't really engaged in the marriage: Kim didn't believe it and rebelled. Neither was looking at consequences.

This reflects profoundly on real issues in todays society; kids are being spoiled and left with stunted emotional / psychological growth, they believe that they know best & that their elders are idiots / fools.


Due to the extremely complex character & plot development; I could / would rather see a 500 page version; it wasn't meant to be a Wham Bam, Clobber, Slash, Destroy, Kill story. It did not turn out the way that I expected nor wanted it to (because I hate cheaters), but it was plausible. In the end "everyone was better off" because they'd grown, including myself.

Thank you LH!! ... DKP

cansellyou the King of Closet Cucks would know

Take that gearless wonderturds word for it - if that bag of shit says this is a cuckie story then you better effin listen cause that eunuch knows all there is to know about being a goddamn cuck.

you mean cantbuy? is that cansellyou?

The cocksmoker who turns off voting on his crappy stories? Like that fuck would know shit about anything or should even comment on a Longhorn story.

Maybe he should go back to drooling over his butt buddy huedogg and the lame nonsense he writes, Two fucking peas in a pod, wastes of fucking space.

Demented

I've read this story a couple of times and still can't figure out why a sane person would want to be involved with a thoroughly demented family. Steve should have run for the hills. ( yes I know this is fiction ). It still merits a five because it is well written.

Short Story or Novel

Way, way, way, too long. I gave up after page 8.

I'm with anon on this story.

I gave up on chapter 9, it was simply to long and drug out. There is definitely some real writing talent here, so I'll give it a good healthy 4 stars.

Great Story

I personally enjoyed the story. True, I believe it could have been shortened but I never gave up on it. You are a skillful teller of tales and I plan to read more in the near future.

Good story but to long

This could have been a really great story but it dragged out to long and I started to lose interest in the plot and the main characters, I still like Nonys' character. The counseling sessions took up way to much time and pages. Also considering how much pain and suffering Rafe caused he got away unscathed, so he has his wife checking on him daily it is nothing compared to what Steve and his wife were going through. You lost major points with me for that alone. It is a good story but I can't help but think that this could have been a great story.

Good story and NOT too long

I'm fine with the length of the story. Very involving, an in-depth view of human nature and human drama.

reread

People keep saying good writer, wimp story
Longhorn__07 is not a good writer in this story at all actually in some/most of his stories, the logic of the story does not follow the characters logic he has written or attempted to write. All the character are true to there outlook in that cheating is okay, but he tried to write a man who was supposed to have a backbone..which fell way short..like reading about a guy blitzed on booze tell a cop he is not drunk standing next to his car that just ran over a pregnant women in her living room...thats how far off base this character is.Longhorn__07 the grammar is flowing but your characters plot logic falls apart, it seems up you have a basic lack of understanding of what a backbone is, moral character,logic,plot reason, yours male led characters dont stand on the moral center you write that they are supposed to have. It does not have to be BTB but cant just have your male characters just give in for no reason and expect to have a good story (unless your a cuckold fan)....you have the skill but you are way off on plot logic.

a monumental waste of time

nothing changed from start to finish. it just took a long time to say it.

An excellent story

Well worth the length. And as a bonus, no typos.

should have found a new......

A new job.....after being told he would need counseling with the cheater to be promoted. (a job is to support your life, not tell you what life to have)

A new woman.....one who would respect him and be faithful.

Lydia was a good character but blinded by family loyalty.

good story

Human life and relations are not black and white but evolve and vary and change. those who are absolute and rigid are sad and boring and not pleasant to be around

absolute and rigid

There are absolutes like right and wrong, where being rigid is no failing.

Thank u

Thank u for your story. It really cleared some issues for me. I had a husband who cheated. The betray the hurt & pain destroyed our marriage. I gave him a chance the first time he cheated. When he came back he accused me of Not trusting him but how could I? I asked him to court me again & win me back..... He didnt instead he cheated again. That was when I knew he wasn't sincere on wanting to get back he only did that cos he going out the first girl he was cheating on me with was using him. The thing that really got me was why & how could he do it. We have 2 beautiful children financially we were 5 years away from being very comfortable. We were married for over 10 years how could he & why why why. I thought he loved me I certainly loved him so how could he cause me so much pain. I asked him over & over the same questions but he'd just say he doesn't know. You story have given me a glimpse of the possible answer. Thank u..... My asshole of an ex now makes up some story between one of my friend & I and is accusing me of cheating on him. That gets me so angry cos I'm not the one who cheated. Twists all our experience together to suit him.

Men who take back a cheater I will NEVER understand.

Sanctity, like virginity, once gone is gone forever.
And trust will subsequently ALWAYS be sullied an element of doubt.

Or as has been said in a different context, "all the king's horses ....."

I have a hard time rating this story. It was a great read and even though it's a fantasy, I'm happy they worked things out between them. As long as they're happy, that's all that really matters.

Personally, I'm not sure I could have forgiven someone like that but nobody really knows what they'd do till they've lived through it themselves.

I'm going to give 5 stars anyhow.

Wonderful!

A thorough development of a personal tragedy and a painful and patient resolution where none existed.
Thank you for a wonderful read. Five star performance.

Great story

This was a great read. Thanks for taking the time to write this. I loved the story from beginning to end!!!

A year later .....

Read this tale a year ago.
Decided to read it a second time, check my opinion, find my old comment and see if my thoughts have changed.
Nope. No change.
Page 13 180 toss out the spine and spin up the whine tripped this from good to huh.
3*

Couldn't stop reading it

This was a well written story that was a bit hard to read and I mean that in a good way. When people try to repair the damage to their marriage it can be very hard and long road. Thank you for a great story.

Good to a point

I was a good story to a point. Too much bull crap and the story was just too long.

A heart felt story

I give him all the credit in the world. Even though he felt it was over, he had to see why it happened. I wish I had a grandma like her.

Excellent read.

As a person starting to cope with somewhat similar circumstance, it was a very moving story provoking honest emotional reaction!

Reread this story, liked it even less

I reread this story and in the end I was still wondering who would put themselves through this shit. I think I gave it to high a rating the first time around, I gave it a "4" but now having reread it I don't feel it deserved a 4. It really only deserved a 3 rating because it was way to long, with weak characters and did we have to follow every single counseling session. Having him go through all of that shit to get a promotion was unrealistic, so was his deciding to take his own life in the end. No job or cheating wife is worth all the counseling crap he endured and if he was going to take his own life then he should have arranged to take the rest of those stupid fucks with him.

I think

I think that about 90% of our already outlandish divorce rate is caused by the lack of the kind of intimacy that ended this story on a high note. I could go into a lot of psycho mumble-jumble but sometimes you just have to just take matters into your own responsibility, ( I really could not say hand )