All Comments on 'First Kiss'

A nice write ~ and even in innocence, Sarahs everywhere wield their power...

Some of the repetitions work better than others. Just for fun, you might want to rewrite this without the repetitions.

cute / funny / sad, a poetic moment remembered? Nice write...a spiral descent of poetic layed tail, I meant tale or did I mean words? <cute poetic tale>

to the early teen years. if only it had been the other way around....nicely done......don

There are strong perceptions here in this poem.

Memories. This poem brought them all back. Hope, love, sadness. Been there. Thank you. Jim.