All Comments on 'Coming'

mentioned in the new poems thread.

doc, you have a seductive pen! A very nice poem that was a poeticly laced tale of intrigue... (~_~)

to see the other side so clearly. Thank you, Doc.

Boo

"Conquers me with her surrender" what a marvelous line! And a line that says so much.

I was thinking "just okay" 'til the very last section, then POW! It could stand alone.

Highly erotic from bed to sky to bed again... It reminded me of a James Joyce poem. Good company you keep!

that was amazing

tingles down my spine when something really grabs me. You made me shiver. I know I will be reading this again. So much more I could say,but I'll just leave you with a "Wow" and a thank you.~D.

How you capture the heat of it all in words...

I love your writing.

~ABG💋

Beautiful