mentioned in the new poems thread.
doc, you have a seductive pen! A very nice poem that was a poeticly laced tale of intrigue... (~_~)
to see the other side so clearly. Thank you, Doc.
"Conquers me with her surrender" what a marvelous line! And a line that says so much.
I was thinking "just okay" 'til the very last section, then POW! It could stand alone.
Highly erotic from bed to sky to bed again... It reminded me of a James Joyce poem. Good company you keep!
that was amazing
tingles down my spine when something really grabs me. You made me shiver. I know I will be reading this again. So much more I could say,but I'll just leave you with a "Wow" and a thank you.~D.
How you capture the heat of it all in words...
I love your writing.
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