All Comments on 'Confusions'

An intensely sensual and sexy addition to this site. My one tiny quibble would be that the lovemaking is rather one-sided, especially considering that the younger sister HAS been nursing a passionate desire for her sibling for years... but I'll excuse that omission in the fervent hope that you plan to continue the story past the emotional cliff's edge where you left it. This tale clearly cries out for a large dose of What Happened Next... Thanks for your fine story -- keep up the good words! Yours sincerely, the Pataphysician

This story was well written and well executed. This really is a great addition to the site...the only question I have is what happens now? Please follow this story up

Come on, so amazing, you can't leave us hanging... feeling reciprocated or not?? What's their future! I don't care if you didn't plan on making a sequel... DO IT!! Please =\ Awesome story ty!

That was really hot. I was a little dissapointed when Linda didn't get any, but it was good nonetheless.

that was extremely hot!! i love this..can you continue their story?? please..

The sex was well described, but it would have been an excellent story even if you had paraphrased around the sex in a gloriously woolly Victorian style.

The growing acceptance of all sexualities that respect the rights of others is one of the very few unequivocal signs of progress in modern times.

I really enjoyed your short story and was sorry to see that it is the only one you have written. Please write more!!!

I am seriously sorry that it has taken me 14 years to read your story, but it has highlighted a legality that alienated me from my family in a simillar way between my younger, by eighteen months, sister and I. We have changed our names and built different indetities and now live as a couple with different family names.

The Conundrum? The law against incest was originalt put in place to ensure a male family line for propey to be passed to without the transdmission of any hereditary consequences of a negative medical nature - this consideration cannot occur in gay couples, female or male, so why are such couples as ours treated with such horror ?

At once incredibly arousing and adorably heartwarming.

Bravo.