OH!!OH!!!OH!!! What a hot story. Please Keep Writing. I'm already horny for the next story.
R
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Anonymous11/06/05
Great writer!
You are a very skilled writer. Can't wait to ready more.
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Anonymous11/07/05
Great Writing. Loved it! One Comment, However...
In the beginning of the story... the mother says, "See, during my twenties I earned my living as a backup dancer." In the very next paragraph she says, "Sixteen years and two children later, I'm a bank manager." She then says, "I've had to scratch and claw my way back up the ladder of life and now, at age thirty-four, I'm beginning to show signs of slowing down."
So... my point is... if she was in her "twenties" sixteen years ago... she would have to be no younger than thirty-six years of age. [20+16=36].
Aside from that... I thought it was a great story!
-Frank
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Anonymous10/07/07
ya!
hullo i am daniel H and i like incest loads and i want to say thank you because this story inspired me to masturbate all over my mum while she slept and some was on her hair i had a great time you made me horny and my girlfriend is horrible like a whale so my mum is only person i can have fuck with.
Smokin'
Excellent story. I can't wait to get the next installment.
incredible
A true pensmith
great acount
please continue the story interested in knowing how daring and reckless you will become in the search of sexual relief without committment.
Still Hard
OH!!OH!!!OH!!! What a hot story. Please Keep Writing. I'm already horny for the next story.
R
Great writer!
You are a very skilled writer. Can't wait to ready more.
Great Writing. Loved it! One Comment, However...
In the beginning of the story... the mother says, "See, during my twenties I earned my living as a backup dancer." In the very next paragraph she says, "Sixteen years and two children later, I'm a bank manager." She then says, "I've had to scratch and claw my way back up the ladder of life and now, at age thirty-four, I'm beginning to show signs of slowing down."
So... my point is... if she was in her "twenties" sixteen years ago... she would have to be no younger than thirty-six years of age. [20+16=36].
Aside from that... I thought it was a great story!
-Frank
ya!
hullo i am daniel H and i like incest loads and i want to say thank you because this story inspired me to masturbate all over my mum while she slept and some was on her hair i had a great time you made me horny and my girlfriend is horrible like a whale so my mum is only person i can have fuck with.
i found this hard to follow....sorry
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