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Becoming A Slut Wife: Liz

byJust Plain Bob©
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by Anonymous

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by 11/06/05

Man! You don't take any prisoners!

I guess a man's gotta do what a man's gotta do!

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by grtguyintx11/06/05

Great story

Take no prisoners. My kind of guy. Although taking her back is a stupid idea.

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by Odball11/06/05

Must have been a bad time for you

Bob: I think I have read all of your "Slut Wife" stories. Certainly they are erotic and very good, even if they all have the same ending.....man catches wife, fucks over her and throws her out. Have you ever considered having her join you/him in a swinging lifestyle? After all, you/he seem to get some pelasure from watching her fuck all the men and you/him seem to love the slut. In the lifestyle you could have your cake and eat it too, quite literally.

But maybe you just don't want her to ahve any pleasure from her fucking and sucking at all.

Oh well, keep up the stories.

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by Anonymous11/06/05

Well You Got My Five

I like your transition and by the comments others do as well - kept her? Well nothings perfect but it's moving in the write direction. You are more appreciated in this vein.

Thanks again - more hoped for - with Regard

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by saw_man111/06/05

New Direction

Nice change of pace.

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by The Wanderer11/06/05

I'm still trying

To understand why I like so much of what you do.

I just wish I could turn it out like you do!!!

DC

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by sherlock4011/06/05

Odball, are you blind? Or is there a defect in

your computer? With the exception of three (now four) stories, all of JPB stories have husbands that love to see their wives fucking other men. They may not like it at first, but almost all of his stories have the husbands being turned on by the wives slutty ways.
By the way JPB, I liked this story very much. Slutty wife gets taken care of, buddies get fucked over for stabbing him in the back and he gets some payback from the wives.

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by Tail End Pete11/07/05

Good one

That cunt messed you up even more than I thought she had. I thought you had cut out a lot of her poison when you wrote the trilogy, but just like the energizer rabbit, shit just pours out. Oh, yeah, nice story. Thanks for ending it before he figured out if he was going to keep her or not. I don't think I could agree with either ending. I'd probably write a gun ending of some sort. Keep the faith, baby.

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by gizzmo30111/07/05

Well

well written interesting story but how could someone take a women like that back

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by BILLYTHEGER11/29/10

that is what i call revenge .he could solde her to a brothel though so she could get aids

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by DWornock09/01/11

Way over the top.

And, nothing about the story is erotic. So I rated it 1*.

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by tazz31709/02/11

ITS HARD TO GET EVEN AB OVO

but a fella's gotta try. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Overthefalls04/29/13

Don't see it.

He loves his wife but drops her off at a warehouse to be gang banged? You lost me there.

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