Very nice story, arousing and hot, made my blood boil.
Thank you !
A few small comments though (tongue in cheek, 2 cents psychology) :
On the last paragraph, you would do this if he cheated you ? Out of grief or out of love ? What about if he wanted you to ?
On the "Anal" theme, Minn's getting it good, what about you ? Writing an enticing story about a theme, including your character, but leaving it out ?
Anyway, thanks again for a nice story with a twist, hoping to read more from you, i leave you to ponder on things...
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Very nice story, arousing and hot, made my blood boil.
Thank you !
A few small comments though (tongue in cheek, 2 cents psychology) :
On the last paragraph, you would do this if he cheated you ? Out of grief or out of love ? What about if he wanted you to ?
On the "Anal" theme, Minn's getting it good, what about you ? Writing an enticing story about a theme, including your character, but leaving it out ?
Anyway, thanks again for a nice story with a twist, hoping to read more from you, i leave you to ponder on things...
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