Katie and the Girls Night Out

That's fucked up

the wife cheats and He gets screwed.. c'mon what the fuck. how can you post something like this? it's a fucking slap in the face of every man that tries to stand up for to his wife.

WOW!!!

BRAVO.........One helluv a good story Bob...How about more like it???

Paul

What reason could

she have given after severn years. an emotional nerve wracking story. a fan always.

Garbage

Sucked

i told you every time you write a good one

you come back and write one like this.what state are you in.fire your lawyer and move on.you make it hard on men.

Interesting story, well told

He was in a box without a lot of options. Going to jail wouldn't help the kids any.

This couple must live in California.

Because no self-respecting lawyer (is there such a thing) in the rest of the country would have had a field day with this case.

fuzzy thinking

oh, how awful that states law is...isn't it? but can't this guy MOVE and get residency? there are 50 other states.....

the author is trying to frame the character as locked in, with only 2 choices. but that is lame, there is always a way out.

that is a weak way to give motivation. better is motivation from inside the character.

You Dog - KUDO's

Just a great story which further displays your strong talents for a very high percentage of readers. A very welcome talented player in the marital consequence arena.

Author - you know I am appreciative and hope you can see by the majority of comments that most others are as well.

Thanks again - with High Regard

Bloody hell Bob

Another good one. Well its to my tast.

Don't quite know that I could have shown the same restraint as this guy Kids or no Kids.

Nicely done!

DC

I don't understand

The name of the site is LITEROTICA

To me that means writing and reading EROTIC stories with the idea that reading one will put some sizzil in his pencil or some juice in her clam

If this kind of stuff makes guys hard then they certainly are not someone that I ever want anywhere near the females in my family

A little bit about property settlement...

Several reviewers have taken the writer to task about not having the husband divorcing her right away. Apparently thinking that surely Katie's outrageous behaviour would keep her from a share of the marital assets. The writer has done his homework. In an on-line survey (taking a whole hour) this reviewer was able to find no state where it is specifically stated that marital fault would have any bearing at all on the distribution of assets. Indeed, when any mention at all is made it's something like, "Marital fault is not a consideration."

Nor was anything found to indicate that marital fault would have anything to do with either child custody or child support. There is some mention that a judge may take adultery into consideration when determining alimony. Though probably not in New Jersy.

Should anyone know of any state where the law does specifically allow for marital fault to be considered when distributing the property, please post a reference. This point has come up many times before.

A pre-nup can change things but who but the wealthy think of that?

I suppose...

..your next fifty stories will be about how wonderfull it is to have your wife fucking every thing that moves and how horny that makes you. Don't give me that "only fiction" bullshit because we all know that stories are usually a reflection of the author's character. I suppose this story proves that even you can be a "man" once in a while.

How about shaking off that condencending, wimp husband personality and write good stories like this one all the time.

reluctantly I will sign with my screen name because of how awfull I have treated you(selfishly of course).

Misunderstood

I don't understand. The wife was patient and loving. She spent time with her sister and friends one night a week and he gets all upset! Why?

The Best

Now finally, a cheating wife story with some REAL connotations. This is almost like any red blooded American husband would act. A god damned woman that would fuck blacks from a bar and then go home to her husband is like one that would play russian Roulette with an automatic pistol. most of the time the "bros" have used needles or do have a disease of some sort. The husband in this story was a wise SOB in that he didn't want any of her pussy after it might have been stained with a disease. Smart man.

One other thing I'm glad about that never happened. There is always the possibility that when the husband saw his wife getting horned by the blacks in his own living room that he'd get a hard on, wait until the niggers left and suck their cum out of her pussy. Usually that is what happens in a story like this.

Bravo toBob for not writing that scenario into it.

a most unusual story

A most unusual story, and a very fine one, at that. Indeed, on a scale of "1" to "5", this tale rates about a "7" or "8". Not particularly erotic, but excellent fiction! (Your use of the word "nigger" is probably going to get you in trouble, though.) But as a story goes, this is a fine piece of work.

-- KVK

Use the word nigger far to much

I was all set to give the story a 75 if not a 100 but the use of the word "nigger" just seriously dropped any type of like I had for this story. I know some people don't like to be PC but seriously, the word is thrown around on this site far to often by some commenters. Thankfully on a few authors seem to have no trouble using the word. Strange thing is that no other racial slur for any other group is used from what I can see, especailly no where near to the degree this is used. From a story point of view for a character I can see using it if needed but the way this story is writen its thrown in there simply to be thrown in there time and time again.

I like to think you can tell a lot about a person from their writing. Not really their personal likes and dislikes (some can write cuckold stories for example without not wanting to be one since a fantasy is simply a fantasy and reality of something is completely different). But use of certain words and not the actual story is something else I feel. Especially how often they are used. This story said a lot about Just Plain Bob. Not saying this to change anyone's view cause he might not even care about this comment. Hell maybe a lot of other people don't even give a damn about this situation. I do I'm afraid cause it basicly stands out and slaps me in the face when there is no need for it to be in the story this way.

I don't think it's about being PC or not. Hell I'd be less critical if there was a warning at the start. People clearly know use of certain words are going to offend people. True there are people that might use slurs agaisnt white people with no trouble but there are even more that don't nor care for this word of it's stupid offshoot sometimes used a("nigga"). Can't tell you how pissed off I get when I see fellow black people using that word as well and can't believe how stupid some people are to think even that is okay.

Oh well. Like I said it was getting really good, better then your usual norm until certain points which I've focused on here. Might not be much but things like this tend to kill things for me and a shame it has I feel.

Very honest and truthful

This story is OUTSTANDING if for no other reason the use of the word "nigger". Nigger, Chicken-fucker, Southern Country Gentleman in the Lumber Business, Hooter, Scab, Nigga, Blackie, JungleBunny, all are very appropriate terms in these fantasy stories to describe Afrikan-Americans and the shit they have done to the good ole USA; as well as Spick, Greaser, Corn-Holler, Wetback for Mexicans; or Slant Eye, Slopehead, Slick, Gook for Asians.
Our great country was made GREAT by the absence of these racial slurs in the 1900s? Anybody wanna buy a scenic view of the Pacific Ocean in Phoenix, Arid-zone? Somehow we did not have gang violence, extreme drug distribution and useage, high welfare costs and millions of young single mothers, etc. when we had those terms in our everyday language without fear of reprisal--when niggers rode in the back of the bus if they rode at all, and drank out of cold water taps in the back of the building, or used "His/Her" joint sex latrines.
If the racially aware minority member does not like these terms, I'm sorry to say....no one is twisting your arm to read these fantasy stories. And I've said it before and I'll say it again.....where are all the fantasy stories where some nigger wench loves to get fucked by a white cock and knocked up accordingly to have a mullatto baby?

He would get the kids

I know the law. He would get the kids. The standard for assigning custody is the best interests of the child. There is absolutely no way any judge would give even partial custody to a woman who engages in mass, unprotected sex with strangers she meets in a bar. That endangers her and her children. Period. You don't even need the final scene when she brings strange men into the home where her children are.

As for paternity, he is the legal father. DNA doesn't matter. He's on their birth certificates.

As for settlements, yes she would get something, but almost every state divides the property with some allocation that reflects relative fault - even though it's not spelled out in the statutes. More importantly, as the custodial parent, he would get the resources needed to support the kids. She would be on her own and the court would take into consideration.

Further, a good lawyer would have arranged to have the woman busted so she would have an arrrest for public lewd behavior - sex in a parking lot is illegal. That would stand against her in a big way.

nice

this was really a good story.... geer what a tramp she was

yeah

whatever they say he would get the kids with what evidence he has.... the courts look at what is best interset for the kids andlol she sure dont have that ..so he gets the house and kids and she gets to fuck who she wants ...and he can get a woamn who has respect for her race and is not a nigger lover 5e22

Artful job!

Whether its a story that turns into somebody being a cuckold, has balls and kicks the bitch out, or they were in an open marriage, whatever, Just Plain Bob definitely writes some compelling stories. This one got my first-ever "5".

As far as use of the word "nigger", geez grow up a little. Whether you like it or not, some people still hold those feelings and there's no reason a fictional character should be barred from displaying those emotions. Besides, what would YOU say if you found your wife wouldn't fuck you but seems to fuck every black man that trips along her path? I've got plenty of black friends, but if my wife did that, I wouldn't discount the idea of throwing it around in my own fit of jealousy.

Would Have voted 200

Excellent story. More true to life than the wimp scenarios. The wife has real psychological problems. Look at the company she & her friends kept. If it were real life, it would be Stupid with a capital S. Also whore with a capital W. A poor excuse for a wife and mother.

I'll stop because I don't know how much longer I can remain polite when thinking about the actions of the women in the story. They must have been getting drugs. What else---besides being white trash---would cause them to act that way?

Well done

Filled with angst and anguish. Realistically no way this couple can continue a relationship. Heartache all around.
Well told.

Basicly it was one of your better stories

But I can't honestly give it 100 for a couple of reason.

Normally your stories are hot or cold for me. Either I love 'em or I don't. I've not found any in between so far.

But unlike "KY Xtian" praise, the total and liberal use of the N-word doesn't necessarily always "ADD" to a story. KY Xtian is trying to defend its use by telling folks to grow up who don't agree with him. All that tells me is that he has never had to live a few years with everyone he ran accross that didn't like him calling him that, and speaking from experience, no matter how hard you try to let that roll off your back, eventually it gets on your nerves. No offense, but folks who never have to live with that are the first to stand in line and tell you its no big deal. Sorta, like a guy telling a woman in labor what labor feels like.

And trying to defend it by saying it was acceptable because it was used by an angry husband doesn't wash. What was the first thing you had the "Good friend" of the main character do to describe the black guys she was sleeping around with? How was that guy wronged or hurt by his friends wife sleeping around with those black guys? At the time you had him use that word, he didn't even know it was his friends wife "THAT" was sleeping around. He thought it was another wife getting some strange while away from home. So exactly why was he so pissed off at some of his best customers? To me it seemed more like a way to sneak in some jabs than a way to flavor a story.

I'm not saying that I don't understand the use of the word in stories. I personally view the use of that word in the same context as swearing. Those words are like seasoning. And like all good receipes, if all the proper ingrediants are used correctly, they can make something really good together. But only if used spareing or in the right ratio, sorta like adding salt to a soup, then they can set the tone for the rest of the story. But if over used, like that word was, then that's all some folks take away from the story and thats what they dwell on. Like if you have a good potato soup that is too salty. Doesn't matter the soup was made well, the salt overshadowed it and leaves a bitter after taste.

The other reason was that the ending seemed kinda rushed. Like you explained everything you wanted about how the husband felt, up to the point of him dropping the wife outside on the ground, and then boom - end. I mean what happened to the money the husband squirreled away? Did the wife try to get some and found it gone? Did the wife leave the house too? Did she stay in town? What happened to the other couples or her friends? After he sent them packets how did they play out? Did the husband even care? Did the wife try really hard to get the kids? Did it get ugly? How was the divorce? Did the divorce go through? I could go on, but I think you see where I'm going with that.

I believe it was one of your "Best" stories so far. But it was just a little too "Salty" for my taste though.

I have to agree with Risq_001!

Most of your stories are either wife becomes slut and the husband loves it or wife is caught as slut and the husband becomes upset. All of these stories seems to be too short. I do not read the former type of story (i.e., cuckold)because it serves little purpose other than a stroke story. Cuckold wimp husband stories seems to be a light form of BSDM. Swinger or open marriage type stories really belong in the group sex or erotic coupling section.

With respect to the use of nigga, nigger and similar forms, as a writer you have every right to use whatever words you want to tell your story. However, I am reminded of a slasher B-movie where there is blood and gore everywhere. There are fans of these kind of movies since this type of excess seems to get a rise out of them. Different strokes for different folks!

But if the wife's lovers had been white I guess the husband would have been ok with it. I realized that you had to make getting a divorce an unrealistic option to write the rest of the story but how about moving to a divorce-friendly state or just taking off with the kids?
Perhaps the wife was being blackmailed or kids threaten by a black gangster into these weekly encounters?

Overall, this story is one of your best. I commend you for allowing public comments on it.

SleeplessinMD

Your lawyer was right

But you should have done it with a hit. Pay to have her blown away. Or better yet, be nice to her but a boat and take her out on a little trip. When you're 25 miles out push her nigger loving ass off the boat and hit her in the head while she is in the water. Then sink the boat when you get back to about a mile out. Say the last thing you saw was she hit her head on the side as it was sinking and she fell over board. Then tell everyone she went undre and nevr came up again. But somehow you should have killed the bitch. What happened to the other couples? Maybe in chapter two! We would all love to see it happen to all those black cum holders..

Not too bad

Didnt love it/Didnt hate it.

One thing of note. Dealing with aids patients on a daily basis I assure you, transmitting aids via saliva is almost impossible unless the person has a cut inside their mouth. You would have to drink almost a large bucket of saliva from a fully blown aids patient to have an incredibly LOW chance of contracting... just thought you might like to know.

empty calories

As with most of JPBs stories, there is no attempt to explain how we got here and there is no attempt to explain how it turns out. We're dumped in the middle of some terrible situation without plausible set ups or resolutions. A story is really easy to write if you don't have to do those things. We get worked up a bit, but it's just empty calories.

My lawyer said 3 years

Interesting story. My lawyer told me to kill my ex or have
her killed. If I did, I might get 3 years. If I didn't,
she would fuck with me for a long time. He was right.

There is an air shaft for a mine up by Fresno Dome. It was
where I would have put her body. About 5x5 and maybe a hundred feet until the rocks hit water. No telling how deep
it is. They would never find her. But I didn't. Glad now
I didn't, but there were many, many years I wish I had. She
never brought men home, I WOULD have shot both of them if she had...and she was smart enough to know it.

But, the best revenge is a life well lived. Hubby 1 Bitch 0

It makes me wonder

The story itself started good but I had little sympathy for the hero OR the author once he kept referring to blacks as niggers. I was surprised he didn't have them all with giant dicks as well. I'm sure he kept his racism deep undercover which usually means that it comes seeping out the sides. Nice try poor form.

Racist, mysoginist crap

You hate African Americans and women. I hope you and your Neanderthal red neck buddies go to some other web site.

bob isn't a nigger lover

i know how to stop you from letting women go back to their hubby now after they have fucked over them.let them fuck a nigger and you will divorce them in your stories.can't have the white bitches fucking the niggers,right bob.bob not a racist,some of his best friends are niggers.

What every white man should do with a nigger

loving whore like this one!!! Katie should have been killed in a car accident or some other way so he wouldn't have to deal with her and her black friends. I don't know of any state that is like the one the husband told us about. Any time a person is caught in adultry and fucking as many men as this bitch was doing the husband would get everything he asked for, including the kids. No judge would give this slut whore custody of any kid. But he should have killed a couple of niggers along the way too just for the hell and fun of it. One at a time he could have cut their cocks off. If she was being gangbanged by them then he should have asked for help from the other husbands. They could have done in the black motherfuckers one at a time. Say one a week after they left the women. This would thus helping the world and the gene pool at the same time.

Gee, Bob, kinda makes you proud...

to know that you appeal to assholes like the one who previously commented on this story. Sorry to admit I haven't yet read it, but saw this hateful expression of unadulterated ignorance and felt compelled to comment. Ain't freedom of expression wonderful? He can spew his venomous bullshit and I can not only tell him to shove his head up his ass where it's obvious he must most often keep it, but chide him for talking with his mouth full.

my lord bob,you're a racist

as a black male,why bring us in this bullshit.leave us alone and can we all get along.i don't want your women.

Over the top? Naw.

Good thing Bob isn't a wacko racist who hates lawyers and club owners.

Will the "idiot Alvaron53" take notice?

Not only did we take pity on the "professional commentator,
Alvaron53", but we decided to give him an upgrade in the spirit of his bullish responses, we can now refer to him as "Alvaron54, the ultimate idiot". Hey, do you suppose we have his attention, now? LOL

Decently told

Good story, JPB. Thank you.

co-existence

it has its definite limits here, where in hindsight, should have had the detective and told all the husbands. it lingered too long, and she showed what she is. as for the n word, i assume there would have been a pejorative word to describe a white man there. all the same, she opened herself to them, regardless or race, creed or color.

race aside

she was what she was and that was it. any race creed or color would not make it any worse. do the dna, etc, and leave her worse than she is

I am a big fan but...

your continued use of nigger was to much. I am black & a woman so I love your stories except that part. Were you cheated on & her lover was black? Again I understand. But be fair, if you are going to use that term, use others describing different races. What will you now call white men who gangbang the wife? How about honkies? Or call them niggers too. Give a little satisfaction to all your black readers who genuinely enjoy your stories and just call the men black and thank you for not calling the black









women in your stories that. Also I am sorry that someone(s) of my race hurt you.

Rough on Kids

I'm going to figure that the reason he fragged out his activity wasn't just because the attorney told him that he didn't have much chance at destroying her. He had the kids to think about and possibly their having some relation ship with their mother.
I liked his sending copies of the report to the other husbands and there he missed an opportunity, they could all have got together and possibly had more divorce strength and maybe even some good future plans as parent for the kids.
Allowing her to remain, as long as she was civil and respectful, was a reasonably good move and who knows had she stayed decent long enough, not gone out, maybe a little better, even platonic, relationship could have developed for the kids sake.
Her crossing the color line only served to heighten the depth of how erotic her infidelity was and finally bringing three guys into her home, a total disrespect for her home, ex-husband and the kids, showed just a low a character she was, worse than low...a slut and a cheap whore, no class, no self respect. Dropping her naked outside was a nice touch, but I might have thought about bringing a gun downstairs and shooting the three lovers and the worthless piece of shit that had No Class, called 911 and said "Help 3 men are raping my wife and threatining to cut me up unless I let them have her, Please Hurry, Help Me?!!! They're threatening to cut her throat, Please Hurry...Bang, Banbg, Bang!!! Quiet, sirens, voices...Officers, "I have done no wrong, I need to talk to my attorney"!!!

It is over the top

But I rated it 5*****

gave it a 1 because

I gave it a 1 because dwornock gave it a 5, it just goes to show that most white people are racist. JPB writes nice stories but this did show his outlook on other races. It's sad that so many white men feel threaten by black men, when that should look at the bubba sitting next to them.

Huedogg, I don't know if you're just fucking with us or not, but....

Your comment that:
"...it just goes to show that most white people are racist."
Is a racist comment in itself! Don't forget that the characters in a story aren't necessarily a reflection of an author's personality, and blah blah blah blah...

It's all just words, man. Just a story to titillate, interest, enjoy, whatever.

Ahh, why do I even bother.....

Double standard

It is amazing to me how blacks get so damn upset when someone of another race calls someone a nigger and yet they call each other that all the time. I am a white teacher in an all black high school and I hear it all the time. Not only from the kids but from the parents. At basketball and football games I hear it from the adults probably 50 or more time during a game. So give me and Bob a break. Just the old double standard and the black race card.

What a bitch.

No body, no crime

Just remember, no body, no crime.

so what?

As far as language goes this is a story in a free country. Language and word usage authenticates the story. Selections of words should not be limited to artist composers and authors. Politicians are judged differently so standard of judgment ate different. If language is used with the expressed interest in hurting or offending someone or a group of people outside of the story then there is a reasonable grounds to protest. Characters is stories are bland without appropriate dialogue and description. Having descriptions of a rascist person is more easily ascertained by their selection of words and expressions. When the words used are atypical of a rascist then the author has presented his character appropriately. Notwithstanding, a repetition of slurs that world le not benefit the reader as a responsible author could responsibly avoid. This argument detracts attention from the purpose of enjoying the read. If words offend you why read? Maybe you should author your own stories in lieu of getting aggravated reading someone else's choice of words and language. Obciously, the husband in this story was quite upset at his wife's slutty behavior taking on gangbangs of black men. Most men would refer to their wife's behavior under emotion duress in a very similar way. Rascist or not black white yellow or red. This skank liked niggers. Now black men would use the same language about their own wife given the same circumstances as poor Tim. The intent is not hurtful to black men but to characterize the pain Tim was feeling about his cheating skank wife.