both "to converge" and "two converge" work!
exotic double vision is not always an orgasim but sometimes reading good poetry as this
Love the imagery and, especially the line, "witness a single thought." Very nice.
supplies the thought,
and perfect imaginary-
to master to the letter,
a pale blue orb
and settles peacefully
to a *grin*.
The tiger and river pass through the iris and converge into a gutsy grin? Very nice.
I loved word descriptions like pungent moorings. This well crafted verse left me marveling at it's simple beauty. Lovely Write!
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