A Marriage in Turmoil Ch. 03

Nope

Sorry DG its like a synopsis of a really good Story, I just would have rather read the Story then the synopsis.

Thanks for the happy ending.

Incidently, on the three parts of this story no one could click the stars, they are non-functional. So, here's five stars for a happy ending.

I rated this stupid chapter 1*.

All that silly fighting would never happen with older professional men. Even more, the men are not going to put forth any effort to fuck some 40 year old hide. If she throws herself at them, they may take it but basically while at 20 she could sell it, at 40 she has to buy it.

Awesome.

This is my first story of yours I read. And I have to say, I loved it. It was amazing. It was different. It was fantastic. Thank you for your story. I will be reading the rest of your stories.

IT IS A GOOD LIFE

if one dont weaken. TK U MLJ LV NV

Great Story

I normally don't comment, but I like most of your stories. This one ended very well. Thought you should know. Thanks

DWmoronic is so stupid

she asked for a refund on a jigsaw puzzle because she said it was broken

read it all

loved it - well written and even had the suspense all good stories need. gave it a 5.

Hmmm, Quite The Candy Apple Ending

She changed her tone awfully quickly...perhaps he should be seeking a discreet DNA test. This chapter was tied up a little too neat & tidy for my taste. For one thing, why wouldn't she have changed Doctors after her husband came back, since she had unjustly ripped her husband behind his back (she is not a psychiatrist.) This wife made a game-changing pronouncement to her spouse, and that conflict deserved a more thorough inspection than the following 2 chapters provided. This doesn't smell right.

Nicely thought out -

Well executed -

I do think it could have been one long story without any problem - but whatever.

The reality of hormone imbalances was well put on - the correction can be very rapid and quite shocking - take away an aberrant sensation and the head begins to work right again heh.

Loved It!

Love, love, love it, as it kinda hit home for me. Nicely written.

Excellent

What a great tale. Does love like that really exist? I guess I wouldn't know, but it's nice to read about.

very good story i wish it could all like that

kids not his

After all this he is sorry, fuck that beat the bitch with stick and toss her ass back to black fuck pole, she had no moral center or worth she will cheat at a later date, a grave site is calling her name, pour gasoline on her and lite the match this bitch is done as far as being a useful wife goes now she is just like the rest of the mindfucking scum wives.

To the last comment or

U sir. Are a psycho. Great work dg keep it up

monkcalm???

monkcalm.....anything butt
I'm sorry for you that your cellmates have been so 'hard' on your little ass. You gotta stop wiggling it around all the time.
Boy, you need to get back on your meds and get control of your wild hormonal swings.

Totally lame ending.

Nothing else to say.

good read.. MONKCALMS comments are from his big A hole

this author has stopped writing , that too bad for us. some of the commenters are total morons or cannot read.

Just to add

I never criticized the story, or how it was laid out, or the writer, but i did rant about the female wife, and i put my name to it, be honest the bitch is a horrible woman, and Fanfar and others i have never been in prison, never been caught, but i am the quiet guy in the club you dont see till its to late, women like this get good men killed while fucking with there lives for them it is just for something to do. reverse the roles and see how many people take a guys side that pulled the shit she did.

Loved it

Five stars. Very good ending.

Feel good

Nice to read a story where things work out. Most breakups are just stupid mis communication or lack of it. Listening is a lost art.

All the best.

To Anonymous (7/30/13 Comment):

DG stopped writing for a while, but restarted in early '13 and became more prolific at the end of the year. DG has written so many stories that I doubt he is troubled by some negative feedback.

ONE

ONE star for this trash. This was a poor story, not even a feel good story. Knocked up at her age--give me a fucking break. I this all you old fucked up writers think about and drinking wine. JUST remember a woman is a life support system for a CUNT.

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Thank you for letting everyone know your I.Q.
If you ever use your brain it might double.

Good story DG

Lit , needs more Authors like DG Hear,

Fantastic story , makes u Laugh, makes u Cry , makes u smile.
wish we had more Authors writing Emotionfests with a happy ending.

xxxhugsxxx

What a heartwarming story!

I loved the lines about the "jockstrap" and "...cock standing up like a monument." I don't believe I have ever heard or read those comments before.

Very good story...

Very good story...Thank you

The author

I'll be sure to read all of hiis stories.

Well Done!

Ed said, "Take the damn drink, Nancy, I'm your boss and you will do what you're told."

Um, he may be her boss, that doesn’t give him the right to force her to do things outside the job that she doesn’t want to do!