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A Marriage in Turmoil Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by count2three07/28/11

Nope

Sorry DG its like a synopsis of a really good Story, I just would have rather read the Story then the synopsis.

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by Bfreetorun09/07/11

Thanks for the happy ending.

Incidently, on the three parts of this story no one could click the stars, they are non-functional. So, here's five stars for a happy ending.

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by DWornock09/12/11

I rated this stupid chapter 1*.

All that silly fighting would never happen with older professional men. Even more, the men are not going to put forth any effort to fuck some 40 year old hide. If she throws herself at them, they may take it but basically while at 20 she could sell it, at 40 she has to buy it.

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by Anonymous09/20/11

Awesome.

This is my first story of yours I read. And I have to say, I loved it. It was amazing. It was different. It was fantastic. Thank you for your story. I will be reading the rest of your stories.

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by tazz31709/20/11

IT IS A GOOD LIFE

if one dont weaken. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by TLC5609/27/11

Great Story

I normally don't comment, but I like most of your stories. This one ended very well. Thought you should know. Thanks

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by Anonymous09/27/11

DWmoronic is so stupid

she asked for a refund on a jigsaw puzzle because she said it was broken

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by cantbuymy03/24/12

read it all

loved it - well written and even had the suspense all good stories need. gave it a 5.

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by UndrApprctd04/18/12

Hmmm, Quite The Candy Apple Ending

She changed her tone awfully quickly...perhaps he should be seeking a discreet DNA test. This chapter was tied up a little too neat & tidy for my taste. For one thing, why wouldn't she have changed Doctors after her husband came back, since she had unjustly ripped her husband behind his back (she is not a psychiatrist.) This wife made a game-changing pronouncement to her spouse, and that conflict deserved a more thorough inspection than the following 2 chapters provided. This doesn't smell right.

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by Tavadelphin06/07/12

Nicely thought out -

Well executed -

I do think it could have been one long story without any problem - but whatever.

The reality of hormone imbalances was well put on - the correction can be very rapid and quite shocking - take away an aberrant sensation and the head begins to work right again heh.

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by Anonymous06/21/12

Loved It!

Love, love, love it, as it kinda hit home for me. Nicely written.

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by betrayedbylove09/22/12

Excellent

What a great tale. Does love like that really exist? I guess I wouldn't know, but it's nice to read about.

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by Anonymous10/24/12

very good story i wish it could all like that

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by monkcalm05/02/13

kids not his

After all this he is sorry, fuck that beat the bitch with stick and toss her ass back to black fuck pole, she had no moral center or worth she will cheat at a later date, a grave site is calling her name, pour gasoline on her and lite the match this bitch is done as far as being a useful wife goes now she is just like the rest of the mindfucking scum wives.

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by Anonymous06/20/13

To the last comment or

U sir. Are a psycho. Great work dg keep it up

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by fanfare07/05/13

monkcalm???

monkcalm.....anything butt
I'm sorry for you that your cellmates have been so 'hard' on your little ass. You gotta stop wiggling it around all the time.
Boy, you need to get back on your meds and get control of your wild hormonal swings.

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by Anonymous07/18/13

Totally lame ending.

Nothing else to say.

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by Anonymous07/30/13

good read.. MONKCALMS comments are from his big A hole

this author has stopped writing , that too bad for us. some of the commenters are total morons or cannot read.

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by monkcalm08/08/13

Just to add

I never criticized the story, or how it was laid out, or the writer, but i did rant about the female wife, and i put my name to it, be honest the bitch is a horrible woman, and Fanfar and others i have never been in prison, never been caught, but i am the quiet guy in the club you dont see till its to late, women like this get good men killed while fucking with there lives for them it is just for something to do. reverse the roles and see how many people take a guys side that pulled the shit she did.

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by Drbeamer333310/24/13

Loved it

Five stars. Very good ending.

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by Anonymous12/02/13

Feel good

Nice to read a story where things work out. Most breakups are just stupid mis communication or lack of it. Listening is a lost art.

All the best.

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by Tim41302/20/14

To Anonymous (7/30/13 Comment):

DG stopped writing for a while, but restarted in early '13 and became more prolific at the end of the year. DG has written so many stories that I doubt he is troubled by some negative feedback.

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by Anonymous03/30/14

ONE

ONE star for this trash. This was a poor story, not even a feel good story. Knocked up at her age--give me a fucking break. I this all you old fucked up writers think about and drinking wine. JUST remember a woman is a life support system for a CUNT.

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by Anonymous05/28/14

Previous comment.

Thank you for letting everyone know your I.Q.
If you ever use your brain it might double.

Good story DG

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by Anonymous07/27/14

Lit , needs more Authors like DG Hear,

Fantastic story , makes u Laugh, makes u Cry , makes u smile.
wish we had more Authors writing Emotionfests with a happy ending.

xxxhugsxxx

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by Tim41341308/07/14

What a heartwarming story!

I loved the lines about the "jockstrap" and "...cock standing up like a monument." I don't believe I have ever heard or read those comments before.

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by impo_5808/07/14

Very good story...

Very good story...Thank you

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by Anonymous08/17/14

The author

I'll be sure to read all of hiis stories.

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by KarenE01/31/15

Well Done!

Ed said, "Take the damn drink, Nancy, I'm your boss and you will do what you're told."

Um, he may be her boss, that doesn’t give him the right to force her to do things outside the job that she doesn’t want to do!

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by HansTrimble04/18/15

At last!

Because you wrote this in three chapters, I was finally able to give one of your stories FIFTEEN STARS!

A wonderful story, every way you look at it. A couple of cute touches right at the end were Pam's husband going out to break the windshield, and the principal couple naming their daughter after Pam.

Your comment said that you keep trying to get a little better with each story; believe me, it shows!

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by rightbank04/18/15

a deliberate misdirect

to set up a contrived ending.

meh

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by dyonysos04/18/15

50 Pounds ??

If she really lost 50 pounds she must have been a great sight without clothes :)
Great story as usual 5*****

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by Tootight105/30/15

good story

loved it. the drink they wanted her to drink was probably drugged. nicely done.

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by Drbeamer333307/09/15

Loved it

second time through. Five stars. I love a happy ending.

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by dozen07/12/15

I too gave you 15*

A note to your editor: "... for Nancy and I " should be "... for Nancy and me"

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by Ambivalence08/19/15

Ok, so what the fuck is with Pam?

I mean, here she is giving him grief because he's not supporting Nancy during what is apparently a hormonal issue...

Now, ok, she (Nancy) supported him during HIS hormonal issue, when he was ruled by his dick...

But how many times are guys reamed because they can't control THEIR hormones... and yet gals, who presumably have issues similar when teens (and hence, should have some idea of what to expect) get a pass when they're older...? They don't have to "control THEIR hormones"...?

Ok, it's only a story... eh, so I'm only complaining in the world of the story... =]

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by Seeker110711/15/15

Second reading

I may have posted before but on this second read I would like to share something. IMHO he was an ass to begin with, but, when he finally manned up he did what he was supposed to and protected what was his. Now the big question is why would the bosses call him a wimp? Because she mentioned that she had weird feelings and the guy separated from her so she could figure out what she wanted refusing to be a cuck or a wimp? Or had she already hung the horns on him? Now the fact that she won her lawsuit against them leads me to believe that she never was unfaithful to him as that would have come out during discovery. But, what else had she said about him to give them that idea? Still, as this is just a story which is fiction then we can only go according to what was written.

Thanks for the offering and keep posting.

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by Anonymous12/23/15

YEAH!

OH MY GOODNESS!! I love this story! There is no buts in my opinion. Thank you for a perfect love story. There aren't enough stars in the night sky to match the award i want to bestove (I hope that is spelt right) apon your story Thank You! Love you all! Bye. Greg.

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by stillaonewomanm12/27/15

thank you

You made being married sexy again on here. Too many stories of cheating, cuckold ing, etc. It surely was a tear jerked.

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by JAUNTYOLDONE01/14/16

Great love story !!!

Great love story !!! I give it a 4 on the Budweiser Scale.***





***for Budweiser Scale information email str3tchy@yahoo.com

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by Anonymous02/05/16

another nice story you have written

thank you

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by Anonymous04/06/16

Women don't understand

that when they say they are thinking of having an affair (sex with another guy), that amount of disrespect disavows any respect or love for her husband. Every action has an equal and opposite reaction and divorce will ensue unless the wife pulls her head out of her behind.

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by Goodhue05/04/16

A Fine Finish!

Thought you did an excellent job of building up to a fabulous ending!
One character flaw I noticed in Jim was that he was a cheapskate! He should have used a roll of quarters,not nickels,for maximum effect!
Seriously though,this 3-parter certainly lived up to the excellence you maintain in all of your stories.I always know I'm in for a treat when I see your name under the title.

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by xtchr07/24/16

Nice Save!

I was a little worried after reading the 1st part where the husband was doing the wrong thing in moving out. But you turned the story around to a true romantic story. The wife really did love her husband. Thanks for a good story and nice save.

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by Anonymous07/24/16

Great story with real life situations. I also believe for me if my wife had been going out with her friends dancing while being felt up and liked it making her unsure of what she wanted to act on would be considered a form of cheating in its self. I totally understand his reaction but he should've never left the house , straight to counseling. Most times it would be to late to fix the marriage and his cheating as a 20 year old is very bad don't get me wrong but should not be held against him all those years later being she took him back. Friends that work in corporate tell me married people are fucking with others at the job all the time . Some of it is opportunity and some is pressure to move up or keep the job when cuts are being made. He started fucking this woman he worked with after one of the bosses fucked her a few times and bragged about it. She was 51 and married for 30 years with only one other man to fuck her besides her hubby. After the boss got her she felt so guilty about it that when He tried she just gave in again . He found this out after about six times with her and felt really bad . He finally got married and there families are very good friends with there secret in tact. He said it was so hard to give her up because he relentlessly fucked her any way he wanted. I'm glad both couples are doing well but I feel really bad that her hubby was humiliated behind his back and will never know that his wife was fucked by two different men at work . The asshole boss fucked her on his boat and had a few guys watch through the window and that's when she stopped that . My friend says that sometimes it's tough when he's with them because he'll get a thought of how he had her begging for more while fucking her ass or cumming on her face after a blowjob and he knows she must think about it once in a while also. He's glad he talked her to seek help and slowly do all she did with him with her husband . Only one time she spoke of it to him and thanked for being so nice and caring to her and that her sex life at home was awesome while hubby was very happy. .

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by Anonymous09/03/16

like these kind of stories

For opposite visit Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com
Serial cheating wife exposed
True REAL LIFE STORY

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by Anonymous11/17/16

nice story

especially when he got his head out of his ass....fantasy is one thing..reality totally different....she only fantasized and led those two jerks on to trap them....but why did she not say so to hubby and then would have saved a load of heartache....and jumping to conclusions.... would not be surprised of just how much sex goes on in companies ...especially nights out and away trips......glad they sorted it out and won....

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