All Comments on 'Forbidden'

Couldn't it have excited your female character by being PRETTY or CURVED or something.

My wife loves a particular dildo becaused it's curved at the end and it reminds her of a former lover.

It twisted left at the end and gave her a different sensation than mine. When she gave him a BJ he shot his stuff against the inside of her cheek.

Anyhow oversized dickey are boring and show no imagination

I agree completely

If betrayal is your cup of tea, then this is the drink for you.

With two cocks in the house and only her to service them, perhaps you can do some more chapters on this one to the point that she begins to openly fuck both of these guys without too much concern for privacy?

one man woman and can't stand to see cheating but I don't rate a story I read that way. You write well and have a good imagination. Keep it up and make them just a little longer.

In such a cheating case, there are normally several emotional roller coaster, especially when it happened at home with the husband around. But there are very little here except she "froze" when her husband came to the bathroom. It just like reading a history book of what happen. Could have done better.

good sex scenes would be hightened by a little bit of background story and emotion....

I recommend thinking of creative ways of describing someone's cock as big besides inches...

I just love cheating stories, can almost picture the woman as my wife. Keep up the great work.

Great story! But did she and her husband have any kids? Did she want to maybe get preggie and her husband couldn't or wouldn't "provide" for her. You did not mention birth control, which is GOOD! Maybe this story can continue with the guest giving her his seeds to grow in her belly, of course secretly?

A nice fucking story and very exciting and good buildup. The description of the fucking is quite realistic. Please keep up the fucking good work

Nice work.

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where o where can the truth be. TK U MLJ LV NV

You put a lot of excitement into just one page. I hope there's more.

"The inane conversation assured me that my secret was safe"!!! Was it really safe? maybe someone knocks at the door and she will be soon served the divorce papaers...1*

cuck shit.

I hope the slut gets everything that is coming to her starting with a divorce.

She don't want no abusive comments. Yet she writes an offensive story about a nasty whore. You deserve abuse.

What a slut.... Just another stupid clueless cuck story. I mean, come on, really. Is he so dumb that he never thought his so called friend wouldn't try to have sex with his wife. Get real. And his wife is such a slut. Just had to see how big He was, and try to deep throat that big thing. I hate where this is going unless the husband get his revenge on the cheaters. 1 star for this sad story

Cute little story, ignore the criticism. There was no cuckery, yet that’s what the criticism is aim at?