An inventive little write ~ break out the dictionary ~ got some words here not seen everyday (like reading a variant of cymry ... ... or it might be the other way around).
and plant the seed naught...words to ponder ...blue
Are you trying to excise your own "bete noir?"
Hmmm made me stop and running the impact of the poem both through my mind and my soul.... very deep and well put together Liar.. ty for the inspirational write it gave me chills...
The language and style of your words create a rare and beautiful poem. I was going to say which lines were my favourite, but honestly you have too many good ones to choose...
Deep dark pools of sadness and sorrow.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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