All Comments on 'Shut Up and Face the Wall'

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tickletickletickletickleover 18 years ago
reality bites

whatever happened to the centuries old trick of biting the rapist's dick off if he insisted on BJ? Good writing, though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I liked the story

but any woman that cant deep throat a 6 inch cock should have her slut card revoked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It does need

some proofreading and maybe a little work on how you word things. Mostly it's the you side of the story. I used to write like that but I find it makes it harder to read...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
mmmmmm delicious

mmmmm i loved this story really got me wet!!

kari annkari annabout 16 years ago
loved it!!

Very sexy story. Loved the gentleness intertwined with his rough forcefulness. That always gets me sooo hot!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
what crap

the description says that you come to know what it feels to be taken forcefully but the story goes from the viewpoint of the rapist ... ironical

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
hott

i thought this was extremely hott...please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice!

Hot, forceful, realistic-- awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
amazing

when are they having a sequel to this !!

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