All Comments on 'Relaxation Method'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
hot

I liked it when the older woman straddled her face, as she was tied down, rubbing her wet pussy furiously over her pretty face, using her face.....hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot

Dont worry about your writing- you know how to make your readers hot; impossible not to cum.almost like you write with a faint accent. More please

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
You mentioned a gay club in the opening paragraph

One thing I really look forward to in a lesbian story is a pretty young woman being seduced by an experienced older woman. But the very fact that your young woman is already gay and meets her older woman at a gay club kind of defeats that whole fantasy seduction element right from the start!

I wish she had instead met an older woman at a regular bar, not knowing that she was a lesbian, and the seduction had ensued from there. I think that would have been far more erotic and interesting. Just my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
poof reader

me thinks anourmous USA could use a poof reeder to LOL

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