by Vickymp
I liked it when the older woman straddled her face, as she was tied down, rubbing her wet pussy furiously over her pretty face, using her face.....hot!
Dont worry about your writing- you know how to make your readers hot; impossible not to cum.almost like you write with a faint accent. More please
One thing I really look forward to in a lesbian story is a pretty young woman being seduced by an experienced older woman. But the very fact that your young woman is already gay and meets her older woman at a gay club kind of defeats that whole fantasy seduction element right from the start!
I wish she had instead met an older woman at a regular bar, not knowing that she was a lesbian, and the seduction had ensued from there. I think that would have been far more erotic and interesting. Just my opinion.