Loved this story. Hope that you continue this one, as well as your "Mom Takes a Ride" story! Thanks!
by
Anonymous01/11/06
give us more chapters
your stories all can have more chapters the way you write them which is good.the son with carrie and cindy should be explored.make them his private sluts.
by
Anonymous02/06/06
need more of this story
please follow this up. i love this series you have started and cant wait for CH. 6.
keep up the good work
by
Anonymous04/17/06
TAKE IT ALL THE WAY!!!
HE MUST IMPREGNATE HER!!!!!
by
Anonymous06/12/06
it's sad that some writer that can write don't
and writers that can't write,want to write all the time.you write with the best of the writers on this site,why not write more.
by
Anonymous07/17/06
I'M SAD
Sad that it seems you have finished this super tale. I'm sure such good writing takes a lot of valuable time, but just read through the comments your stories have attracted and know that you have a very appreciative and loyal audience waiting with bated breath for your next chapter - Please? Thanks again for a terrific story.
by
Anonymous07/27/07
Another insemination vote
You have done a wonderful job of bringing Jill and Tim along to this point. Their relationship would be tested by a pregnancy....please!
by
Anonymous10/22/07
mm
uhhnnn wow that made me so wet.
mmmmm uhhh god
by
Anonymous02/25/08
DELICIOUS
What a wonderful series! I was hard and wet many times. Your writing is very good. Please continue with more chapters. Another chapter to " Mom Takes A Ride " would be great also! Thanks for the stories. RAY.
Well I have to say this is one of the best stories I have read yet! Im hoping there is more to this story. It would be great to have mom become his personal slut, begging for his cock to fill her asshole every day and drinking his cum daily! Then she can set up her freinds to fuck him and become both of there cumslut slaves. Mom and son using them to seduce her husband and blackmail him into supporting them. But with him as well being under mom and sons control and then the son gets to sleep with mom all the time and dad is a cuckold to son and mom, at which point if you wanted they could make dad a gay cocksucking slave
that is the best story i have ever read please continue let them get pregnant it is possible tied tubs have failed it would be so hot and cindy could get preg too please
by
Anonymous11/26/08
WOW!!!!!
I don't want to see Mom pregnant, Tim needs a little Cindy and her daughter. Maybe one of his Annt's.
Thank you for Writing Them..
by
Anonymous01/17/09
one of the best
love the build up to the anal sex...mother reluctance..son humping her ass every chance he got..finally taking her ass which is the best part of incest sex.
by
Anonymous01/27/09
Wonderful Series
What a wonderful series! Please continue with more chapters.
by
Anonymous01/31/09
Truly and Outstanding Work. I hope it continues wi
This is a moving and sensually written piece. It is also very believable. I kept your interest and always gave more.
by
Anonymous03/16/09
loads of hot
Cannot count number of times I masturbated to this story. all the different facets of storyline are hot.
by
Anonymous05/09/09
fucking hot
this is making my pussy throb like hell, i wish someone like tim would fuck ME right now.
by
Anonymous06/11/09
HOT-AND REALLY SEXY
ONE OF THE HOTTEST AND SEXUALLY STIMULATING. THE WRITER IS OUTSTANDING IN HIS WRITING AT BEING ABLE TO GET ME HOT THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE STORY. I WANT TO READ MORE OF HIS STORIES, SINCE I SEE HE HASN'T WRITTEN ANY MORE SINCE 05.
This series was hott!!! I agree with other posters, we need to either see mom become his slut, or action including the aforemention aunt or best freind Carrie. I enjoyed this emensly.
by
Anonymous07/25/09
Hot!
One of the hottest mother/son incest series on this site. I hope (not much since it's been so long) we get more chapters one day...
by
Anonymous08/03/09
GREAT READ
Keep going, I'd like to read about him, his mom and her friends!
by
Anonymous08/25/09
i was hard
I made me so hard I think I need to join in and I could fuck that pussy wile he fucks your ass mommy
by
Anonymous09/08/09
awesome
Only found you yesterday read everything you've written in 2 sittings. Well written, great characters, good story line just a great piece of writing well done. You got to get Cindy in on the act i'm thinking mom catches Tim and Cindy up to no good an rapes both of them ? Well i got to go i've leaked about a quart of precum in my boxers needs a shower. lol Again great read thankyou. I'll be looking for you sequel. regards Puremagic.
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Anonymous11/07/09
soo awwsomee
you know what ? Jim shoud fuck Cindy too that s unfair he must fuck her!! and u r great ok? that s the best erotic story i v ever read keep writing !!!!!
by
Anonymous11/28/09
BEST STORY HERE
This story must be the greatest incest story on here i felt the greatest feeling of guilty pleasure reading this. PLEASE MAKE MORE!
love your story wish there were more moves out there to see like that i have jack off at least 4 time read your story
by
Anonymous12/02/09
Brilliant story
and really enjoyed reading it - well done - hope you have other stories to offer us?
by
Anonymous03/02/10
mom son
very well written story i can relate to the story
by
Anonymous03/31/10
GREAT SERIES!
This is a favorite fantasy of mine, and you hit every single point of what's in my head! LOVED the detail description, the reluctance at first and then giving in to wild sexual depravity. 5 stars for sure...I'm dehydrated now!
That was an awesome series. Here's hoping his mother allows him to fuck Carrie and Cindy
by
Anonymous11/11/10
GoodGoodGood!
Dear Nakdsalr,
WoW! What a lovely story - how well told! I could actually see n feel Jill's ass!
Keep writing!
Suzy
by
Anonymous11/16/10
Boom
oooh! One can feel Jill's ass getting oiled, rubbed & finally, fucked! Wonderful story
by
Anonymous12/28/10
Why not one more chapter?
Going by the comments made, everyone loved the story. It was beautiful. Why didn't you include the 'completion' so we could share in and enjoy their fulfillment?
You are one sick motherf*cker, and I mean that as a complement. I Know that I'm five years and several comments late but where's chapter 6?
by
Anonymous12/31/10
Wow! All time classic!!!
This story and Mom takes a Ride are all-time erotic classics, wonderfull stuff!
by
Anonymous02/18/11
Great read
I LOVED your writing. I miss my Mom and sure wish we could have done all this before she passed away..... Came very close but she was worried about getting pregnant.
Love the story, had me dripping the whole time. Where is chapter6,7,8,9?
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Anonymous04/04/11
Wonderful
My goodness what a beautifully sexy story, I loved it and I even ended picturing myself in Jill's place with a horny son. it was an enjoyable read and made me so beautifully wet, thank you.
Kim, From UK
ktslips@yahoo.co.uk
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Anonymous04/28/11
great story...
great story and wish it had not ended.
by
Anonymous05/03/11
WOW
Caught the imagination straight away was standing proud nearly all through
by
Anonymous05/19/11
Fulfills my desires too
Waiting for number 6. Jill made me cum to good to be true.
wish i had grown up with a mother like that,,,i was thoroughly engrossed in every word of this story,,,picturing it all in my minds eye,,,how truly erotic!! very satisfying,,want more like this please!
Just love this series because of the nature in the relationship, and also how the 2 leads interact, back and forth, along with descriptive action. Would love to see this series extended.
by
Anonymous09/05/11
One of the best!
One of the best stories in the incest/taboo genre. Would be truly grateful if you added more. Please change nothing about your style and maintain the character's true personalities throughout, as you have done already.
English
Keep up the great work!
Loved it from start to finish.
it wasn't fair
you left us hanging so long,please don't forget your fans this long again.great story keep it up(smile).
you're wonderful
All your stories were told exquistely. You just have the talent.
excellent
starting off with a great ch 5 will there be a ch 6 I hope so
Excellent story
Wow that was very good and keep up more ch. 06 thanks cfh
Loved the story
Loved this story. Hope that you continue this one, as well as your "Mom Takes a Ride" story! Thanks!
give us more chapters
your stories all can have more chapters the way you write them which is good.the son with carrie and cindy should be explored.make them his private sluts.
need more of this story
please follow this up. i love this series you have started and cant wait for CH. 6.
keep up the good work
TAKE IT ALL THE WAY!!!
HE MUST IMPREGNATE HER!!!!!
it's sad that some writer that can write don't
and writers that can't write,want to write all the time.you write with the best of the writers on this site,why not write more.
I'M SAD
Sad that it seems you have finished this super tale. I'm sure such good writing takes a lot of valuable time, but just read through the comments your stories have attracted and know that you have a very appreciative and loyal audience waiting with bated breath for your next chapter - Please? Thanks again for a terrific story.
Another insemination vote
You have done a wonderful job of bringing Jill and Tim along to this point. Their relationship would be tested by a pregnancy....please!
mm
uhhnnn wow that made me so wet.
mmmmm uhhh god
DELICIOUS
What a wonderful series! I was hard and wet many times. Your writing is very good. Please continue with more chapters. Another chapter to " Mom Takes A Ride " would be great also! Thanks for the stories. RAY.
What a HOT Story
Well I have to say this is one of the best stories I have read yet! Im hoping there is more to this story. It would be great to have mom become his personal slut, begging for his cock to fill her asshole every day and drinking his cum daily! Then she can set up her freinds to fuck him and become both of there cumslut slaves. Mom and son using them to seduce her husband and blackmail him into supporting them. But with him as well being under mom and sons control and then the son gets to sleep with mom all the time and dad is a cuckold to son and mom, at which point if you wanted they could make dad a gay cocksucking slave
OH MY GOD
that is the best story i have ever read please continue let them get pregnant it is possible tied tubs have failed it would be so hot and cindy could get preg too please
WOW!!!!!
I don't want to see Mom pregnant, Tim needs a little Cindy and her daughter. Maybe one of his Annt's.
Thank you for Writing Them..
one of the best
love the build up to the anal sex...mother reluctance..son humping her ass every chance he got..finally taking her ass which is the best part of incest sex.
Wonderful Series
What a wonderful series! Please continue with more chapters.
Truly and Outstanding Work. I hope it continues wi
This is a moving and sensually written piece. It is also very believable. I kept your interest and always gave more.
loads of hot
Cannot count number of times I masturbated to this story. all the different facets of storyline are hot.
fucking hot
this is making my pussy throb like hell, i wish someone like tim would fuck ME right now.
HOT-AND REALLY SEXY
ONE OF THE HOTTEST AND SEXUALLY STIMULATING. THE WRITER IS OUTSTANDING IN HIS WRITING AT BEING ABLE TO GET ME HOT THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE STORY. I WANT TO READ MORE OF HIS STORIES, SINCE I SEE HE HASN'T WRITTEN ANY MORE SINCE 05.
Needs to continue.
This series was hott!!! I agree with other posters, we need to either see mom become his slut, or action including the aforemention aunt or best freind Carrie. I enjoyed this emensly.
Hot!
One of the hottest mother/son incest series on this site. I hope (not much since it's been so long) we get more chapters one day...
GREAT READ
Keep going, I'd like to read about him, his mom and her friends!
i was hard
I made me so hard I think I need to join in and I could fuck that pussy wile he fucks your ass mommy
awesome
Only found you yesterday read everything you've written in 2 sittings. Well written, great characters, good story line just a great piece of writing well done. You got to get Cindy in on the act i'm thinking mom catches Tim and Cindy up to no good an rapes both of them ? Well i got to go i've leaked about a quart of precum in my boxers needs a shower. lol Again great read thankyou. I'll be looking for you sequel. regards Puremagic.
soo awwsomee
you know what ? Jim shoud fuck Cindy too that s unfair he must fuck her!! and u r great ok? that s the best erotic story i v ever read keep writing !!!!!
BEST STORY HERE
This story must be the greatest incest story on here i felt the greatest feeling of guilty pleasure reading this. PLEASE MAKE MORE!
mom fulfills sons desires 5
love your story wish there were more moves out there to see like that i have jack off at least 4 time read your story
Brilliant story
and really enjoyed reading it - well done - hope you have other stories to offer us?
mom son
very well written story i can relate to the story
GREAT SERIES!
This is a favorite fantasy of mine, and you hit every single point of what's in my head! LOVED the detail description, the reluctance at first and then giving in to wild sexual depravity. 5 stars for sure...I'm dehydrated now!
Fantastic!
Great series! Only wish I have, is that you had continued it.
AWESOME
That was an awesome series. Here's hoping his mother allows him to fuck Carrie and Cindy
GoodGoodGood!
Dear Nakdsalr,
WoW! What a lovely story - how well told! I could actually see n feel Jill's ass!
Keep writing!
Suzy
Boom
oooh! One can feel Jill's ass getting oiled, rubbed & finally, fucked! Wonderful story
Why not one more chapter?
Going by the comments made, everyone loved the story. It was beautiful. Why didn't you include the 'completion' so we could share in and enjoy their fulfillment?
Damn!!
You are one sick motherf*cker, and I mean that as a complement. I Know that I'm five years and several comments late but where's chapter 6?
Wow! All time classic!!!
This story and Mom takes a Ride are all-time erotic classics, wonderfull stuff!
Great read
I LOVED your writing. I miss my Mom and sure wish we could have done all this before she passed away..... Came very close but she was worried about getting pregnant.
thombru
Love the story, had me dripping the whole time. Where is chapter6,7,8,9?
Wonderful
My goodness what a beautifully sexy story, I loved it and I even ended picturing myself in Jill's place with a horny son. it was an enjoyable read and made me so beautifully wet, thank you.
Kim, From UK
ktslips@yahoo.co.uk
great story...
great story and wish it had not ended.
WOW
Caught the imagination straight away was standing proud nearly all through
Fulfills my desires too
Waiting for number 6. Jill made me cum to good to be true.
wonderfully sexy read!
wish i had grown up with a mother like that,,,i was thoroughly engrossed in every word of this story,,,picturing it all in my minds eye,,,how truly erotic!! very satisfying,,want more like this please!
Great character build up
Just love this series because of the nature in the relationship, and also how the 2 leads interact, back and forth, along with descriptive action. Would love to see this series extended.
One of the best!
One of the best stories in the incest/taboo genre. Would be truly grateful if you added more. Please change nothing about your style and maintain the character's true personalities throughout, as you have done already.
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