All Comments on 'Of Broken Planets and Bitter Hearts'

well done!

"flushing today

down the china bowls of a wasted future…"

As Sack said, bitter, but sad also!

since I allowed myself

the great journey of your

roots grown wild,

Quite a seed you plant here QP-

much to the liking of your reader*winks*(me)

Yet painfully sad, it is ..

Been truth has always been the

bite that hurts the longest..

well done my intelligent friend,

*****(5) lushes peaches for you.

missed ya !

-sGp-

this poem had some really gripping lines like the china bowls of wasted futures... inspirational write.

I really enjoyed it! Write more..I'm waiting <smiles>

I enjoyed your insights here QP.. as usual you have a gift of rhetoric and made me look up some words from my dusty dictionary... been too long. Intriguing is the what I get from this work.

du.