All Comments on 'I Know He's a King Ch. 01'

Could have been longer, but a good start nontheless... looking forward to your future chapters.

I agree, talented writing & promising plot.

Great start and full of promise. It might be interesting to do a chapter from the King's point of view, just a suggestion :)

good beginning! more please.

i can't wait to see where this story is going and will read on further..its amazing what some parents did and still do to their own children although i think the kink of being sold at auction would be rather sensual although not perm and not to a whole damn army lol...i look forward to reading on and do hope you continue this story further. respectfully fan in Texas

PLSE PLSE CONTINUE IT! GREAT STARTING!!! dun stop the series.

My literotica account is so screwed up that I'm about to cry... No, not really, I never liked Literotica much anyway. I've forgotten to do this but... Now I'm doing it.

Literotica is fucked up, so you who are looking for my stories will have to read them at some other place, like SOL (storiesonline.net) or AFF (adultfanfiction.net - in the original part, or just search for my name - which is the same there as on lit... nothing compares to being consistent)

And oh by the way, I've gotten a new blog - much better - and a new mail as well: Jane.shield@hotmail.com

Anyone who'd like to add me at MSN is welcome to do so. I'm so lonely :s.... No, not really. Perhaps, a bit... teeny tad.

This was Jane Shield, over and out!