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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/08/05

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I loved how this work ran in a deep spiral continuing the vivid imagery that shocks the mental levels into understanding the MORE of this world... very mystic there blue..(Du hands over crown lol..) nice job
du~

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by LeBroz11/08/05

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Ohhhh, my head!
Making me think!
Speaking, you have been, to cymry
and spinning words of celtic thread.

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by sack11/09/05

where's Webster when I need him....

neat selection of words, I'm in awe of your ability!

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by sweet GA peaches11/09/05

TOO LONG GONE...

from the depths of
your blue..
that runs ever so true
on this side,
and mystic with creation..

*****YOU SCORED from the peach!

luv2theblu-

sGp

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by My Erotic Tale11/10/05

steel veins

this looks familiar great write blue~ images that flash at you almost made me duck

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