I loved how this work ran in a deep spiral continuing the vivid imagery that shocks the mental levels into understanding the MORE of this world... very mystic there blue..(Du hands over crown lol..) nice job
Ohhhh, my head!
Making me think!
Speaking, you have been, to cymry
and spinning words of celtic thread.
neat selection of words, I'm in awe of your ability!
from the depths of
that runs ever so true
on this side,
and mystic with creation..
*****YOU SCORED from the peach!
this looks familiar great write blue~ images that flash at you almost made me duck
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