I liked the whole power thing going on with the older woman and younger girl. The innocent little coed having her pretty face coated in the sexy neighbor lady's pussy juice. I'd like to see little miss coed have her makeup smeared and pussy juice matted face and hair go home and her parents see what a little nasty cuntlicker she is.
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Anonymous11/10/05
A little bit too much like a porn film
The idea of an older woman seducing a younger woman is certainly a good one. I liked the string bikini and the shared shower. Good ideas, both! But there was very little physical attraction mentioned here on either side. Did the younger woman feel at all turned on by the older woman's scantily clad body? And was the older woman at all turned on by her pretty younger neighbor? Your story just made it seem like she wanted something, anything, to eat her pussy. I just didn't find that very erotic. Still, not a bad start.
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Anonymous11/11/05
To short..
Good story but you could have been a little longer here. Alot of possibilities to explore here, and it all happened so easy almost too easy to be believed..
English
very hot
I liked the whole power thing going on with the older woman and younger girl. The innocent little coed having her pretty face coated in the sexy neighbor lady's pussy juice. I'd like to see little miss coed have her makeup smeared and pussy juice matted face and hair go home and her parents see what a little nasty cuntlicker she is.
A little bit too much like a porn film
The idea of an older woman seducing a younger woman is certainly a good one. I liked the string bikini and the shared shower. Good ideas, both! But there was very little physical attraction mentioned here on either side. Did the younger woman feel at all turned on by the older woman's scantily clad body? And was the older woman at all turned on by her pretty younger neighbor? Your story just made it seem like she wanted something, anything, to eat her pussy. I just didn't find that very erotic. Still, not a bad start.
To short..
Good story but you could have been a little longer here. Alot of possibilities to explore here, and it all happened so easy almost too easy to be believed..
More please!
Great story, please write more!
trimming...
more clippings, please!
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