All Comments on 'Literotica Limerick'

Clever, but far too long!

the first commentor, very clever but I couldn't read all those limiricks...I thought I was back in high school. But I do admire your talent for rhyming.

As this author stated....

They did attempt to offer it up to Lit in a story category but was rejected and it was put up in Poems instead. As a note to some that read this and think its too long.... sometimes we the authors have NO control over where our writing ends up.... sometimes its the luck of the draw.

PS... thought it was fun to read

Always, E

Insightful about all the pleasures and perversions of the Literotica community. Bright and funny. Highly recommended for a pleasurable read.

TOO Funny! Great work!

Love your work.

Some folks said it was great,

But that there was too much on the plate,

Well, as for me,

I read it with glee,

I love authors who are so literate.

usually they are a bust.....using words that are naughty====to increase the haughty====bringing to us'ens new lust, TK U MLJ LV NV

interesting subjects. Very detailed and literate. The meters were off here and there, but the content was good.

But how sexual liberation causes a SOUL to be more wealthy is beyond my grasp. If perverse seems to have merit, it may be the breaking down of moral conscience...and that is dangerous, not to see where the lines are drawn between healthy and harmful.

Hola Lia :) I don't know how I had not looked in before now, anyway I enjoyed your fine work, words to feel fine on line with.

Especially on Lit, with the best of it, you touched on every possible aspecto that we, I, could encounter here and I think it shows just how someone "virgin" to this sort of site can get an "education". I can relate to 'Eve' in many ways, right down to the trimmed bush ;) I gave up landscaping though lOl

Lots of fun, smiles from me all throughout!

Such nice words and no it isn't too long. It is perfect! I am there with you!

This is absolute genius!!! Love it!

Skinner took his lady out for dinner.

At 0400 PM it was in her.

The dinner, not Skinner.

Skinner was in her before dinner.

That is a great Limerick poem there, I have enough trouble just adding a sentence to a limerick and you have composed a whole story line with limericks I think you are now my personal hero....for the next ten minutes that is!

wtf.. it was great. A story of a Literotican.

Wow! Impressive

but Limericks do make for many a rap, TK U MLJ LV NV

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