All Comments on 'Definition: Chara'

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ReltneReltneover 18 years ago
Very Good!

Love the image/concept this creates:

"she

smells like lemon grass

and honest skin,

. . . "

This poem deserves more that a "5".

sacksackover 18 years ago
the best here today.....

and still another testament to your creative talent!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very nice

Anticipation and sweetness. Yummy.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Sounds like more than the jacket's got attitude.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.

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