Controlled by Hypnosis

Doesn't sound realistic...

Doesn't sound realistic... If he could hypnotise Judy so easily why he didn't do it before they broke up... How come Judy didn't recognise him when he showed up in the park?

Good story

The last person to comment said its not realistic, but that doesnt bother me. Hypnotism that strong is impossible any way. The only things I would change is to make it longer and maybe for him to give judy anal too. --Yoz.

fascinating Story

like a short vignette that is meant to stimulate and please the reader. I will say that I was surprised that you didn't have Ilene and Judy become lovers, unless, of course, you would entice them to both meet you at the same time and have a threesome.

Really enjoyed your story..

When might we get new chapters.

Needs a little more suspense and creativity

Wouldn't it be nice if...

If this really worked, and I mean ALL of it -- I'd have you over to meet my wife and our best gal pal....