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very erotic,
keep them coming, no pun intended.
Next episode please
Excellent slow build up which will hopefully be followed up with further steps.
Got my dick hard.
My dick is hard, now what? Please write another story quick!
Another take on the same old story
That said, it was fairly well written, and even a little bit realistic. I've taken offense to the recent nude beach / sex with a stranger posts because they give an incorrect picture of naturalism. This story does too, it suggests that people are lurking around for some type of sexual thrill, ready to ejaculate on anyone who moves. My own experience with nudism is that once the bathing suit targets are removed, those day glow bull's eyes designed to draw attention to breasts and genitals, nudism is very relaxing. I've been to nude beaches in France, Spain, Italy and the Adriatic islands and I have not once seen any sexual activity. But, then again, people don't want to read that.
Out-fucking-standing!
This story was well-written on so many levels...
The mechanics are smooth and grammar is clean. Good start. Even better is character building – just a bit of insight to make them feel like real people.
The actual climax (literally, no?) in the little cabana was fantastic. Just enough swinging to get their feet wet (or her chest, I suppose). It's good to start slow like this, it gives you plenty of room to grow and take ever more daring steps in a progression that mirrors the way real people increase their sexual courage. This may tread all over territory that has been done before, like SLC mentions, but Steve gives it a spin that feels real enough and it's attached to character that we like. That's what this whole exercise is about.
In the nitty gritty, department, the dip-to-lip maneuver is a hot one – and could foreshadow the wife getting over her no-girls-in-the-threesome leaning. Even if it doesn't, it stretches the imagination without taking you out of the story.
Well done.
I hope we get a chance to follow this specific couple and this specific story line through an interesting, swinging growth.
HARD TO BEAT
LOVED YOUR STORY, WERE YOUNG COUPLE WITH SAME FANTASY. DID ALOT OF SHOWING OFF AT XXX RATED DRIVEIN THEATERS. GAVE MANY FREE SHOWS.
silly
A veranda has doors? I thought a veranda was like a patio.
Any chance, ha,ha,ha, you mean a cabana?
For the love of all things holy - WRITE MORE
please keep writing. Loved the control of the story - very realistic with just the hand. My FAVORITE by far... and ive read a few. Thank you for my recent EXPLOSION!
Very, very hot.
And excellently written.
Cumming with her at the beach !
Well written with a believable ending to a couple starting out living their fantasies.Good job. Let's see more.
Feels very real
Love this story. Nice build and the slight nervousness and indecision, yet surrendering to the moment feels very real. For the person who commented that naturism isn't like this, the author stated that this was a private, clothing optional couples resort with sex play assumed.
On the other hand, my wife and I have been to nude beaches several times and, when at the more secluded ones, like some sex play ourselves. We have ALWAYS been approached by single men like this - once by two! So, it happens. 😉
Loved it!
Very believable and very hot!
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