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In Dreams He Will Come

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by barepusslover11/13/05

Well Written/Hot!!!

Very well written and to the piont. Hopefully a continuation to this storyline - please?? Thank you.

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by 11/13/05

For a first contribution

to Literotica this wasn't badly written. Take a little time and stretch out the action and you'll do well.

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