All Comments on 'Daughter Punished'

Yes you horny daddy - spank your wives pussy as your horny daughter wants - put also give your angel a spanking on her virgin pink wet pussy as well.

it is a nice and dirty story, but you can't write anything of disappiontments at the climax of the story...and of your readers..

whats your issue? that was the wort thing ive ever read. im not even wet!!!!

It was good let me give the daughter a good seeing to dirty cow

cant you american cunts learn that its mummy, not mommy

Anon 'Why'. If a story is written by an American and set in America, then the US spelling and usage is correct! If it had been written by a Brit and set in the UK, then it should have the correct English spelling (which is also in general use world wide).

As for the story itself - it was shit, pure and simple shit, and deserved the one star I gave it.

Your storyline was weak. Characters were not fleshed out. There was not a single character that was fun to identify with.

Go back to the drawing board and instill some life into these 1 dimensional characters.

Good luck

That sounds delicious! I would love to lick, suck and eat her, her mom & dad as they enjoy their anal and poo play.

i diddnt care for the subject,writing, or the filthy aspects of the sex in general. i gave it 3 stars but i think it deserved fewer.

Filthy and sexy

Love it - nice and smelly - makes me cum!!!