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by tafxkz02/03/06

Wow

You're nobody until somebody loves you,
And nobody loves you unless you have
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Based on facts and figures; when the outer shell
Is more valuable than the treasures within...
One day we'll all be broke.
`````````` i love this line!

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by oggbashan05/07/06

Mind over measurement

Your poem points the moral very clearly.

Unfortunately too many people judge solely by externals. The advertising industry sells with images of airbrushed/manipulated perfection that almost everyone will fail to find in any human.

Thank you for reminding me that beauty can be beneath the external appearance.

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